The metal maiden


  
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It all started when I looked out the window and saw a women, but no ordinary woman, a woman made of metal from cars and bikes but she could fly. It was amazing a woman who could fly. but the metal began to rust and if it got rusty she would die. so she went to the scrapyard to find more metal to help but there was no metal of her kind so she was bound to die and nothing could help. Unless she visited another scrapyard but she couldn’t cross any motorways in case she was seen but she did it any ways and was caught and captured and was put in a museum and was never seen again.
Glenn Age: 11

The colossal, heavy iron lady stood on the lonely grass. Her cogs and pistons interlocked, she stared ahead for what seemed like forever. 

Years passed. Tourists came and went, photographs were taken. But then, after a long time, no-one came. 

One day, some strange men, in a green uniform arrived, dismantled her and took her away. No-one ever saw the Metal Maiden again.

Casey age 11

I had a really good life before my horrible mum sent me to a metal dump when I was four. Will I ever go back I thought? Three consecutive years past! But different happened, so one day I went for a walk and I ended up in a amusing field. After a few days, someone come up to me, gently touched me on the shoulder and whispered “I know what it feels like,” then walked away. Puzzled and confused, I stud there thinking, what was that about? I turned to an angle and saw that an enormous person, made of metal, was standing right behind me “is it real?” I said to myself. Suddenly, I realised it was the girl that came up to me! What happened I thought still puzzled. After a week it was still there but pieces had fallen off. I was thinking in my head is she magic?
Ruby age: 8

The Touch



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I tore into the fabric of death itself, layer by layer, trying to reach the hand I will never touch again. The light blinded me. But I knew it was her.
Ever since she had died, I couldn’t stop thinking about her. I saw her in dreams, painful memories. I have thought about her so much that I couldn’t tell if the memories were dreams or if the dreams were memories.

It’s strange. After these desolate years I couldn’t remember much about her, just hazy memories of what colour her hair was, or her eyes. But now, I can remember every feature about her, every single strand of hair. How her eyes shone in the sunlight.

But this is impossible. She was killed years ago, in a car accident.

I pushed back my logical barrier, and reached into her arms.

My lover.

Emilie Age: 11.

The Light Side

All his life Otto longed to see his sister again, their time together was too miniscule. He wished he had never invited Gilderoy over. The past was the past, the future still waits. Everything went black…
“Guh… ouch… Where?’’ Otto looks around there is nothing there but sheets. No doors, just sheets.

“Where… am… I?” The youthful man ponders. Maybe I got put in a Mental Hospital? Why would they do that? Otto can’t seem to get around the fact he had just woken up in a Mental Hospital!

“HELLO! I’m in here what is going on!?” Screeches the confused man. Otto then hears something, a familiar voice, like a dream.

“Otto? Where is my dear brother?” The voice echos.

“Adriana… But you’re gone!” Otto says confuzzled on what is happening.

“Come join me Otto, grab my hand.” Adriana says. A whirlwind of light appears and a hand pops out the wall. Otto instinctively grabs it, vroom he is gone!
Jessica Age: 12.

I could hear scratching and banging coming from the other side of the wall. The noise intensified and a tiny hole started to open up before my eyes. Within a few moments, large pieces of plaster started to fall from the mouldy wall onto the dusty, wooden floor of my cell. Suddenly, the hole started to grow, until it was big enough for me to fit through. Eventually, a pale, bony hand stretched through the plaster tunnel and beckoned me to come closer. Instinctively, I sped along the floor and tripped on some ragged, old sheets and paper that I had been using as my bed for months on end. I struggled to my feet and reached out for the hand. Step by step, I clambered through the the wall until I finally reached daylight. I was flabbergasted by the overwhelming sight and was so relieved to be free.
Lottie Age: 9

 

 

I was sleeping in my lovely warm bed but then suddenly there was a huge BANG!!!! “AHHHHHH WHAT WAS THAT!!!” so I rushed down stairs slammed open the kitchen door to my surprise  there was a figure  picking up my lovely little dog “NO DEXTER” the black figure faded through a big  hole in the wall it looked like a black hole or a portal I looked again and there was a hairy pale hand popping out of the hole in the wall so I grabbed hold of the  hand  and I was sucked in through the portal I was shocked at what I sore a colossal city before my eyes I sore the black figure I ran after it the figure turned round and swung his metal covered arm hitting my fragile face and sending me half way across the car park I picked my bruised and broken body up I was confused as to what just happened to me and the next thing I knew I was laying on flaw again but this time when I got up I was back in my own bed with my own dog and with my own life and I thought to myself it was just a        dream or was it BANG!!!! “not again”.

 

Morley Age: 10

 

 

 

One day there was a boy who wondered what another dimension when he was young he had no friends and was left alone in his bedroom as he was always disheartened as he thought what it would be like with his mum back I never thought it would come like this but obviously did  when I was crying for my mother I heard a crack on the whole it was a portal but I did not know what to do does he go though or not ”should I should I don’t want to go but I may see my mother in that “I thought to myself do I want to do this and that what I did was step though fearful colorful portal  at the other side  I saw a hand come though I tiny hole and it said “come to me son I was thinking I should do this.

 

Luke Age: 10

 

 

As the light fades, the light turns into darkness the mist of the dark gloomy sky. I was walking down a long corridor of a mansion it was dark as space I heard a sudden shout of a man but it was only me in the house there was brightness coming from the closet I was daring to go in there there was gusts of wind trying to blow the door down, the door was on its last hinge I slowly walked in the closet…there was a younger man standing in front of what it looks like a portal, he was pulling some one through the spinning portal I slowly stepped back. There was a dust storm all around me I quickly ran out a slammed the door behind me I was going to call someone but I was going to leave it to my self no one knows if he is meant to be in hear, no one knows…`

 

Mason Age: 11

 

 

I viscously tore into the fabric of the wall I didn’t know what I was going to find but every time I pulled a piece out it seemed like my heart was cracking until I found her. Her hand reached out to me I leaned into the light of the tunnel, although I was scared, I grabbed her hand and pulled, I pulled so hard that my arms ached. She revealed her pure beauty

“What’s your name young man.” as she said this eeriness rushed through the air

“Peter my name is peter, why am I here? What is this place? Who are you?” I said so worriedly

“You have been in an accident peter I’m here to take you to the skies they are wonderful all the things you would imagine it to be and more”

She grabbed my hands and amazingly we both turned to transparent ghost and we were gone.

 

Ellie Age: 11

 

 

Lying there knowing that it could take decades to bring back Luna, Dimension 309 was a tough place to get to, and a very dangerous place to get back from.  I knew what to do, the hard thing was getting it on paper.  Luna I love you to the moon and back, I’ll save you beautiful.

 

So it’s been two hours now and I’ve nearly got the solution, but this time I have to go into Dimension 309.  There is one finale thing though, due to the dimension being so far away, it could be that Luna will be dead, because of where the dimension is.

 

Click clickedy click ….   So the time has come, I’m coming for you beautiful.

 

LUNA… LUNA… ARE YOU… OK!

 

JAZ JAZ IS… THAT YOU…

 

BABY I’M COMING FOR YA!

 

Here goes nothing.

 

Wooshhhhhhh woooooshhhhhh cccccquc!

 

Where are you, are you ok, please answer me…

 

Brandon Age: 11

 

 

I was in the hospital, waiting, listening and praying I was only 11 what I was going through was hard she was lying there pale, half dead. I screamed, no mum stay with me, ‘’Mark listen to me, take this out of my hand’’ She could barely move, or reach out to clear the tear of my cheek. ‘’Mark I’m so sorry dear I’ll have to go soon but remember this I love you and on your 18th birthday I shall come back for you be good and make some new friends.’’ Ok I promise mum.’’ She fell I gave a yelp ‘NNOO.’’ Dad scooped me out of the room so I didn’t have to see my mother lie there’ DEAD!

7 years later

I was sat them on my bed, I was waiting re winding the message she said so many years ago it was 1:00 my birthday then all of a sudden the wall disappeared in stead it was…

It was like heaven mum is that you…

To be continued

 

Caitlin Age: 11

 

 

I couldn’t breathe. Dust clogged my throat and lungs. I lay shivering in the misty darkness; I heard nothing. Scraps of dirty fabrics and paper lay bedraggled all over the wooden floor. I remembered everything so clearly, so clearly it hurt just to open my eyes. Tears dripped slowly from my cold cheeks. It was his test, he sent 5 of us down here, and Mia was one of them.

I had known Mia since I was young; she was the greatest friend I had ever had. But that’s all gone now, I was scared, I hurt them all trying to get my own way. I had to watch them all screaming, getting dragged up a golden tunnel. Mia was the last one up, she cried for me to save her. I didn’t, fear was controlling my body and I couldn’t move. Now I sit here alone, waiting for death…

 

Tyler Age:11

 

 

Not so long ago I use to know a story of a curious boy. In 1954

There was a boy named   George    who every year got more curious but one time got him in to deep danger. When he was 13

He had just moved into a brand new house although there

Was just one room nobody could go in?

When he moved in he was getting curious his nick name was curious George.  He went in to the forbidden room he saw something that said don’t touch he did any way and behind it was a reflected image of himself he was touching it all we know   is that he entered whatever it was. he saw a world of curiousness. he realized there was the girl of his dreams it didn’t end to well he realized that glass shards through his heart I know this because I was his sister escaping the portal

 

Chloe Age: 10

 

 

We were moving into a new house and we went for a viewing the outside looked beautiful and the inside as well but I don’t think I saw the true colours when we were looking…So we had our decision on whether we were moving so we did. I put my dirty close on to get the walls stripped to put the new wallpaper on and move the table in. I started with the wall it took me 2 hours to fill the whole room after all the hard work I went down stars to have a cup of coffee that’s when I heard the bang I rushed up to the room that I had just decorated there was a hole write through it looked like a cave for a minute suddenly a hand stretched out to grab me I freaked out shouted ran and that was the end of me.

 

Chellise Age: 10

 

 

We are moving me and my sister. We went in to a bedroom there is a massive hole I stuck my hand in the hole to see what had happened to the wall. It was a dirty place to live in. It sucked me through I let out a squeak. It is a house with no rent. It is on a field with mud. We have to make it like a real world to live like normal people we found out it was a haunted house as I was down in the dump were it led you there was 37 other people there with sleeping bags   and pillows like me and Denny my sister. As I was walking down the dumps there were dogs that trapped you in the cage. There were dead bodies every were I got my leg eaten I found out Denny dead on the floor.

 

Lexi Age: 10

 

 

 

There was once a man who loved to draw, but what he didn’t know was what he drew became alive. He started to draw little undetailed pictures and as days grew by drew a lot more detailed pictures which people thought were amazing, but one day he drew a man which became real but they didn’t become real in the real world it was in his imagination. The little detailed dwarf became true and all the people in his imagination disliked him until a few days afterwards, the man which was drawing all these characters drew more dwarves and the dwarf’s population grew bigger and bigger until his imagination got full and he began to dislike drawing and one by one the characters started to die. And the old man started to lose his memory but nobody could do anything that was the end of imagination land.

 

Glenn Age: 11

 

 

I looked in the grimy room. Dust swirls were creating in the corner. Torn bedsheets were in tatters across the carpeted floor. I stepped inside; my wellingtons squelching on the carpet after every step, leaving mud behind. I felt the dust fill my lungs.

I put my hand against the wall; it was wet. I pulled it away. I heard a shaking sound coming from the wall. I was scared. I tried to run to the doorway but the door shut forcefully.

I looked back at the wall. Something was happening but I couldn’t quite make it out. Slowly, the plaster began to peel away. Behind it was a glowing light that temporarily blinded me. I walked to the Light-I felt drawn to it. Suddenly, a hand appeared, groping around, looking to hold on to something. I reached out my hand and it pulled me out of the room.

 

Casey Age: 10

 

 

 

My dad passed away today. We just moved house and we love it, however I don’t think it likes us. The other day when we were about to go to bed I heard a wall break and saw a yellow beamed light from under the door, but when I got there to see what was going on there was nothing there. The next day my wife, Kiara went shopping at ASDA so I was alone. I heard a ghostly voice call out to me and sounded like it was telling me to stay calm and relax. I was petrified. As I went back upstairs I saw that the wall was broken again. I peeled off the wall paper and a dead-like hand came out of it. It was my father. He was the one giving me the signs and wanted to take me to heaven. So I let him.

 

Logan Age: 11

 

 

 

I was walking. I heard a noise. What was it? Nobody knows… I was on my way for a job interview when I heard a sudden scream. I thought nothing of it. I carried on. Then another scream was let out of a window I was slightly more worried but I still carried on. I heard a screech I ran into the old rotten building I heard a girl screaming but she was no-where to be seen. I touch the back wall where the scream was coming from a big hole appeared to another land! A Hand popped out asking mine. Stupidly I put my hand though the wall. That was a day to regret. The hand grabbed mine, everything turned white.  I was right well…. kind of right I was in another world it looked like my friends and family but I was wrong I was never seen again.

 

Caitlin Age: 10. 

As the light fades, I was walking down the street. I was waiting for my friend Emma, I finally found her just hear the chippy. We were just chilling looking for something to do… Then we heard a noise, we didn’t know what it was. We tried to ignore but it just kept coming back into our heads. Emma shivered of frightens, I wanted to go in but Emma kept on saying no. “Sounds like a portal,” she said hiding behind me. Emma got brave we went in. The door swung open as I was trying to get threw. Our throats were clogged with dust. There was white sheets on the floor. We turned around and there it was,The wall paper ripped around the portal. Emma touched it… she was gone. Trying to get back the portal took her. After that day I never saw her again….
What was it .. why was it there …. What happened to Emma … no body knows…. 

 
Isabel Age:10

Chris and Maria had just bought a new house. Maria was getting ready to have there first child. “If it’s a boy, why don’t we call it Henry?” said Chris. ” If it’s a girl, why don’t we call it Angela?” said Maria. That night, they were awoken by a big crash and the sound of ripping paper. “Aaaaaaagggggggghhhhhhhh!” they screamed. Chris wasn’t a coward, but going down those steps was, to him, the scariest thing he had done in his life. Maria was behind him, clasping on to his back. What they saw, was shreds of paper on the ground, every thing they owned was gone, and a humongous hole in the wall. But all to soon, Maria got dragged up into the air, sucked up through the hole. Chris reached out to grab her hand. But he was to late. She was gone.  

Isabel Age:8

Story Start: The lightbulb


  
Layla and Tom the son and daughter of an inventor. One day, the inventor invented a brand new invention called a lightbulb. After three months he had created hundreds of them. He put them into straw baskets and handed them to his children. “Take these and sell them for no more or no less than £10 OK?” “Yes Father”they chorused. After they had sold 5, they came across an old man. So they went over to the old man to see if he wanted to buy one. But when they had finished talking, the old man said “Alakasam” and Tom and Layla found them selfs in a massive lightbulb!

Isabel age:8

I was walking down the beach and saw this old flashing light so I walked up to it. It whistled through my ears and I picked it up but…

I went right in side it mum screemed so loud the bulb ratlled and this voice said “hello I’m bulbby I sit in hear and put voices in side you.every time a new kid comes in I will always dig it deep in there head that they have seen me!”I can’t see you I have gone blind you will have to be hounted like me…..
Lexi age: 10
Today it has been 12 years since my mother died and every year I have always speades her ashes, in a beautiful place on top of the hill this is where she past away.But one day I went to spread her ashes on the same hill in the same place but I found out I was in the middle of nowhere. I took the same path and everything but found I was with thousand of light hanging over me and all of a sudden a hide buld fell done next to me.A young boy came out and the bulb smashes in to pieces. I picked up as many pieces as I could and the boy said he lived there he picked as much as he could to so now every year I’ll spread my mums ashes while he spreads his old houses ashes and became the best of friends.

Savannah 12

one day on a steep hill something crashed on the grounds of the mini people they had a very dark home. They were all confused and frightened. The queen of mini people ordered them to stay inside but two children did not listen. They went up the steep hill once again and they looked in this thing and realised that there was more in the sky! The girl wanted to keep it but she couldn’t it was to big so she collected up some small ones for her self to hang just like the others but no the boy just wanted to get inside and take out the out the jewel. at night when nobody was watching, they cautiously cracked this thing and got the jewel out from the side and collected the bulbs so it was light forever
Jessica Age: 9

i was taking a midnight stroll through the fields with a girl in my class, when suddenly i got an idea that idea got bigger and bigger so I told her my idea: lets build a lightbulb so we did not noticing the size so we sat down beside it and suddenly it begins to fall.we stand up with more laughter than a crowd watching a comiedian.
Glenn Age: 11

The cracked light-bulb

Early one evening as the sky was beginning to crackle into spark-light Jack and Jill went up there favourite hill. Jack had a slingshot he was fed up after his bad day. He shot one stone into the sky and it hit a colossal light-bulb it came falling and falling and falling down to the ground landing at the summit of the hill. Jill was collecting light-bulbs of the ground. Jill was so terror-stricken and curios too, because she wanted to get closer to the best but cracked light-bulb but was unsure of what she might find. Jack ran towards Jill to put his arm over her shoulder. As they got closer they were amazed to see the light-bulb still in tacked only the small hole were the stone had hit it.

Nathan Age:10
It all started with a small idea, an idea starting with a light bulb. 

Madeline had always wanted to take her best friend Alix on an adventure, she wanted to do something with power! So she after days she finally realised what she should do. She didn’t know how it would work, but one thing was for sure, she needed a lot of light bulbs.
Dashing up the hill Madeline drove Alix from the trenches to the very night lit sky at the very top of the jurassic hill. Slowly they walked up together, there on the ground was a brobdingnagian light bulb leaning on its side cracked. They picked up a basket and started to place light bulbs on the grass. They lit up! There was no wire, they hung some from tree branches. They lit up also! 
This was the kind of adventure a lifetime of years would not reward.
Jessica age: 12

Story Start Nov 2015 “The girl of the sea”


girl in the sea

Lots of new writers joined us this time, welcome one and all. Please leave a comment let us know what you think.

Max

 

One day there was a young girl called Lucy age 7.

She was having a swim until she suddenly… She drowned but she could breath under water just like a shark. She stayed under water forever but people said they saw her. Some people thought she was dead no one ever found the body. A 10-year-old boy called James knew what had happened a new species a vampire shark he said its name was a vompshark that he made up had bit her. She wasn’t dead she lived like a shark for ever she never died. She is still living today. James was the only person who knew because no one ever believed him.

Age: 8

 

Morley

 

This little girl lives a normal life with a normal family but what they don’t know is that this young girl is aqua girl a brave and fearsome girl she protects the seas with her life but one day an old friend showed up in a bad mood he came with an army of bull sharks tiger shark’s great white sharks and a couple of megaladons “you shall bow to me” said the giant thing in the ocean the little girl called the strongest fish around to defend the rest of the fish the little girl was hit and knocked out but she woke after the fight it was the same as before the fight “we won yeah” the man was nowhere to be seen but he said “ I’ll be back soon and when I am you’ll pay” then the man ran off in a hurry the fish gathered round and said thank you.

Age: 10

 

Imogen

There was once an eleven-year-old girl called Jenny. One day, something strange happened, her fourteen-year-old brother Joshua went scuba diving. When he didn’t return home that night, Jenny’s parents got worried and went out looking for Josh. Jenny wanted to look for him too, but nobody would let her. Jenny had a secret power that nobody knew about, she could breathe under water. The following day, Jenny sneaked out to look for her brother in the sea. It was very scary and dark underwater, but Jenny kept on searching, using a lantern to light the sea. Eventually she found him lost in a secret underwater cave. “Jenny, you’ve found me!” Said Josh!” Do you know the way out?”

“Follow me,” she said. She led him home and they got dry. Afterwards Jenny told them all about her special power and they were very happy together!

Age: 9

 

Josh

As the girl stands above the sea the frothy waves splash, she wonders what it would be like being amongst the fish and the seaweed. The girl (only 8) lives in a poor part of London, she can’t cope at home, with her arguing, her brother always causing trouble. She is the brains of the family, never in any trouble. She was thinking about all of this when suddenly she felt a tug on her leg, she was pulled into the sea. The eerie darkness underneath the sea shocked the girl. She swam around, she spotted some fish which proceeded to swim with her. Her left foot was still being tugged on by whatever was taking her. She was overpowered and couldn’t swim anymore, she was gasping for air, the overwhelming events that had taken place over the last few seconds really shocked her. She was buried under the sea

Age: 10

 

Chellise

It was a Monday morning at school again. Everyone hates Monday mornings in my school. For my entire life I wanted to be a swimmer. It was the 20th of November and the time was 6am, I decided to go for a swim in the sea. Something just didn’t feel right, it was dark and very misty. I had a very strange feeling. I went back to shore to pick up my lantern, as I turned around and the glow off the lantern hit the water, I could not believe what I could see…….

Age: 10

Glenn

it all starts in the ocean with a little girl, or should I say little mermaid. well it started with her swimming in the ocean she swam and swam to the depth of the ocean where her and her family lives its weird because humans said for her to have no sort of fishy look just two scales on her face she protects well that’s the end of it

Age: 11

Lexi

 

I am genifa I go swimming with my dad every weekend. There was a hole in the floor of the pool I said to my dad look dad there’s a hole. We carried on swimming and I swan one length I got my foot stuck in the hole and I shouted dad I’m drowning he said I’m coming I said help but bye the time he hot there I was gone. There we’re see animals everywhere I will enjoy it down hear anyway but what will I do no food no friends. Anyway 3 hours passed by I found a turtle friend he was friendly I miss my dad lots but I will eat the sea weed I will find another group of friends I’m sure the next day I came back up the hole and saw my dad I was so happy my mum and dad we’re there looking at the hole and crying so I pop out of the hole and say surprise I’m back they screen and cry even more I jump out and say hello I missed you I’m glad to see you

Age: 10

 

Casey

 

I wake up from my deep slumber. I slowly get out of the overturned, rusty cage that has kept me imprisoned for as long as I can remember. I pick up my ever glowing lantern as I set about stretching my legs.

“I should have done this a few thousand years ago,” I manage, my voice being gurgled by the on going flow of water.

Oblivious to the fish, big or small, I try to find my way around. After a while, I start to get used to moving my “leg” about. All of a sudden, I feel a pain that goes deep down to the bone. It seems to have come from at the bottom of my body. I look at my damaged Mermaid’s tail and decide to rest it. So I swim back to my cage, curling up into a ball and falling asleep.

I haven’t woken up yet…

Age: 10

Belle

 

One misty morning as I woke up I had a funny dream where I was walking through the hall and I heard a creek but it was only my Dad. He started walking towards me. I didn’t know what to do, but then he started to speak to me. Dad said “find that scroll, find it.” I reply “what scroll?” but by then he had all ready gone.

Age: 8

Tilly

The girl and the lamp

It was a stormy day in 1896 when … Heidi set sail with her parents. They where leaving Timbuctoo to go to the enchanted kingdom. They were half way across codeye sea when … Heidi jumped in to see what the bright light was at the bottom of the ocean. And it was a bright firing roaring lantern and the lantern belonged to the mermaids of the sea. They used it so they could see were the crispy seaweed was that they loved for there tea. When they met Heidi they became very good friends with her they told Heidi a secret that the lamp was magical and she could have two wishes Heidi wished to be a mermaid for the day and and to take some crispy seaweed back to mum and dad for tea and both of her wishes came true!

Age: 8

Dylan

There was a young girl who was called Emily and she loved myths about the sea. So when see had a couple of hours see went diving in the Caribbean. She took a lantern with her, so that she could see if there was anything valuable under the sea. She was looking for shark’s teeth or treasure, so Emily and her dad could afford a better house. Her mum had died in a car crash and it left her and her dad with little money as her dad was only a fisherman.

Suddenly she was surrounded by Manta Rays and her only option was to hide in a dark and gloomy cave. But then, out of the corner of her eye she saw an object and it appeared to be a treasure chest. She tried to carry it up to the surface but it was too much for her, so she whistled to the dolphins and they helped her carry it to the coast. She opened it and found emeralds, a lot of gold coins and a giant ruby. She sold them all at the market and made a lot of money and spent it on a better house and things they needed.

Age: 8

Tilly

A ten-year-old girl was having an evening stroll down the grassy bank of lake Windermere when she saw an eerie glow in the depths of the lake about three metres away.

So she slowly waded in (only because she was inquisitive) then the water got too deep and the ground beneath her vanished. The water was freezing but she gathered herself together and dived down into the icy depths. Suddenly everything was black but then she caught sight of the light and swam towards it.

Age: 8

Iona

 

Here is a short story about how I discovered a talking fish. I was swimming through the sapphire sea with a lamp. There were amazing bizarre creatures swimming around me. Suddenly! I saw a cave. I swam near it and then I went inside it … TREASURE everywhere! As I swam into the dark gloomy cave, my lamp lit the rubies, gold and pearls, lighting a rainbow around me. But suddenly my blonde long hair got caught between the smooth rocks. I was determined to escape, even if it meant losing my beautiful beloved hair! Just then, my luck was in as a friendly, talking, weird fish swam into the cave. The pink spiky big eyed fish realised I was desperate to get away so she kindly untangled my hair quickly. The creature said “hello nice to meet you”. I replied “thank you, nice to meet you too”.

Age: 9

Jessica

 

“Good night James!” cheered Hanna “Good night Hanna!” called James. Hanna was a kind girl she loved her little brother James.

Hanna went to sleep, she was very comfy and cozy that night, she woke up in a wonderful mood only to find that she wasn’t in her bed…she was on a sea bed!! She went to have a look around and noticed that she could speak and breathe under water. Then this fish came and started speaking to her. The fish said something about his friend Casper being stuck underneath a rock. Hanna said she would like to help. The two new friends swam to the little fish, luckily Hanna was a human so she was able to lift the rock. Now it was nighttime in the sea world and when Hanna woke up in the morning she was back in her own bed and it turned out it was all just a dream.

Age: 9

Henry

In the ocean a girl called Nancy had been made to walk the plank by Mully the pirate. She sunk to the bottom and saw a dark cave. Nancy swam into it and saw it was full of shiny jewels. On her way she saw the skeletons of the others who had walked the plank before but had not made it out alive.

She picked up a handful of glittering rubies and put them in the bag that the pirates had given her. Nancy turned to swim out of the cave but just then she felt a bony hand touching her bag. She slowly turned around and saw a SKELETON rip open her bag and the rubies scattered on the rocks.

Nancy managed to grab one ruby without the skeleton noticing and swam to the surface.

As she came up for air the pirates were waiting for their treasure.

Age: 9

ruarri

My name is Sofia,

and I am on search for treasure, you may ask how I can breathe under water as I am human, but I stole some gills off a fish and now I can breathe under water and search what I am looking for. a wise old fisherman once told me if I ever get the chance of going to the mysterious land of arkor to look out for the 3 fragments of the core of aslon beneath this will be treasure and lots of it, but!!! there will be one problem auto pilot fish guard this area and the master Lucas is controlling them the only way to stop them is to use the light of the special admanita lantern I hold that was passed down from my Grandpa.

wish me luck guys I am feeling brave and hoping my gills will stay in place until I get to the mysterious land of arkor.

Age: 8

Maya

A girl was walking on the shore of the beach. It was night time and she had a lamp her Mum said it was waterproof. She was walking and a gust of wind threw her into the sea. It was cold and very ruff all of a sudden. When the sea calmed down she went for a swim in the middle of the night. It is a strange time to swim but she did it anyway. Then she realized she could breath under water. She saw a lovely sight she saw a clown fish and named him Nemo and went back to her parent’s for a lovely bath.

Age: 8

Isabel

 

Tess was an eleven-year-old girl. One day she went diving with her friends. She had been waiting for this day to come for weeks, months… and maybe even years. Tess shot out of bed that day, rushed her breakfast got changed did all that stuff and stood by the door. After half an hour it was finally time to go. When she got there her friends were there all ready. When it was time they dived in. “Woooooooow!” they exclaimed. The sea was beautiful. Suddenly, Tess took a wrong turn. She was lost. She turned on her lantern and suddenly saw sharks surrounding her. She was not that exited now.

Age: 8
Brandon 

The Whale and Bella.
As the girl swam deep in the ocean looking for the exit out of the blue gloomy sea, she heard a noise, a noise of a whale, like an Orca.  

The Orca appeared and said “hi little one, what are you doing down here in the blue gloomy sea,”.  

The girl was amazed when she heard the Orca talk and she explained everything to the whale.  

“Well you see I was on the beach with my parents, and a big wave pulled me into the sea, and here I am,”.  

The girl started to cry, then the whale decided to help the girl, and they became friends.  

“My name is Bella,” whimpered the girl whilst she cleared her eyes.

“My name is just Whale,” said the Orca with depression.

The Orca hated his name he wanted something fancy, but Bella and Whale couldn’t decide quick enough, because…

Age: 11

Phoebe

Madeline had gone to visit her grandparents who lived by the sea. That night something strange happened it was a full moon and the water started to rise into the house.The water was lashing against the door and windows trying to get in.Suddenly all the water rushed into the house and flooded all the rooms.To Madeline’s surprise she was able to breathe .Although it was cold and dark she could see because of the lamp off her bed side table.She went off exploring the house looking for her grandparents. To her amazement they to could breathe under water and were having a party with her family. So she joined in as a family tradition.
Age: 8
Georgia 

My amazing adventure started when I sat down at my dressing table to brush my hair. I realised that the reflection looking back at me wasn’t mine. I reached forward to touch the glass and it turned to water beneath my fingers. Before I knew it I had stepped through into a mysterious underwater world. Beside me was a lantern which I picked up to help me explore this strange new place. As I swam along my attention was drawn towards an old shipwreck lying on the sea bed. At first I thought I was alone, but then I noticed that a dolphin was playfully swimming along beside me. We swam together towards the shipwreck and started to explore. It must have been a big boat as there was lots to explore and I was able to imagine how amazing this boat must have been. Something shiny caught my eye and we both squeezed through a tight space towards it. To my surprise I found a chest full of gold coins and other treasures. Maybe this was pirate loot! I slipped one gold coin into my pocket and decided it was time to leave but that was not going to be so easy. When I tried to swim out the same way my dress got caught on an old rusty nail. I tried desperately to free myself but couldn’t. Just as I was starting to panic I felt something pushing me from behind. It was my dolphin friend! With one gigantic push it freed me and with relief we both left the ship. We spent a little more time exploring this exotic world, looking at wonderful fish and sea creatures. All of a sudden I heard a voice calling me. It sounded like my mother! The voice got louder and louder which seemed to echo around me. All of a sudden I woke in my own bed at home. It took me a moment to realise that my amazing underwater adventure was really just a dream. But as I sat up in bed I felt something cold and hard in my hand. When I opened my hand I saw to my surprise a beautiful gold coin so was it all a dream or was it real?

Age: 9

Emily 

I cannot bring myself to imagine I am under the mysterious sea seeking for my long lost mother. Just to think that this morning I was told where she was all along, by my grandpa. 
       I was only nine when she left; lots of questions spun around my head, making me perplexed. My father passed away in the war, that’s when my mother disappeared.

       My grandpa finally told me the hidden secret; that my mother was a mermaid and needed to go back to her kingdom. When my grandpa confessed to me, I felt a mixture of emotions, I didn’t know whether to cry or be furious. My face must have not had any expression at all.  So here I am under the sea anxiously looking for my mother; I inherited her quality to breathe underwater. As I swim further, a kingdom slowly forms in front of my startled eyes.

Age: 10

luke
There was a girl who dreams of being a mermaid .And her mum thought that it was to dangros so she did not not spend time after she said that . She loved dolting and she wanted to swim with them in greas but she was poor and she ate mud and pig. But there was one thing she did like and thats being helpfull and helping sea animals. But she loved having food aswell and talling dolting and the wied thing is that they have a frened relashinonship with the oteas as well 
One night she wished to go to greece and the next moring she was uder water with doltings and she woken up with a tall and she did not like what was haping becuse she cold not swim and she was trired but then she sore a person but she never new that it was her mum
Age: 10

chloe

As i dive in to the cold dark ocean i feel a cold breeze running through me as i light a lamp i see everything . my lamp does not get dimmer . 

all around me there is multicoulred fish of all speicies . as i land on the ocean ground i see a door is i slowly .. carefully walk the door opens as i begin to turn back ,. i wonder how i got here in the first place maybe im not a human i might be a murmaid . what i always wanted to be but shhh dont tell any one at al and…………………..
Age 10

Ellie

One minute I was holding the old lantern next the monster wave pulled me under. I closed my eyes waiting for something to happen but nothing did. I was still conscious after about 5 minutes of sinking into the dark depths of the sea.

Flickers of light came to my eyes, I opened them. The lantern was still lit. Then I realised I was breathing. It was all a blur at first then I could see fish swimming round. I swam for what seemed like hours looking at the wonders of the sea. I came to a ship wreck the eeriness of the sea hit me as I passed through the grimy beams. I saw a light quite close. As I got closer I could see a dark figure. It was a human a human boy. He had the same lantern 

Now me and the boy swim round every corner of the sea. We are the children of the sea.

Age: 11
Jamie 
The girl swims under water, as the lantern shines the way like a dangler fish. She swims calm and peacefully without bothering the fish, exploring and looking for treasure. Having no sharks chasing her she’s safe from being devoured. Or is she?
Age: 10
Dylan 

As the girl of the sea swims down the town of Sinon Omsvile wishes to go home, well she does not have a lot of memorys of land. They stopped sending out massive search party 2 years ago sines are island sank 3 years ago. they sent out massive search ships and guess what they haven’t even found us.I bet you are thinking how I can I breath under water, well we all were injected before we sunk with an secret formula by a government experiment to breath underwater, half human half fish, for when are island sunk because of an earthquake. My nextdoor neighbour does not like water,he is always complaining about being wet, but I do ,and fish fascinating things they are no arms no legs just yousin there body to move.

Age: 10

Tyler

The young girl logs onto the old,slow loading laptop, she opens up a page and types in ‘russbrownauthor’ she then logs onto her teachers website. She starts to write.

             ‘Dear Diary’ she starts the story.She thinks about how she wants her story to be different so she looks deeply into the eyes of the girl whom she is mean to write about,She knows what to right.’there is a girl in my class at school,year 6 and this girl’ she thinks of her friends Ellie Emily Molly etc… She chooses Ellie ‘now Ellie is just weird she actually swims to school and she’s under there for hours, i just don’t understand, its insane,unnatural .She is a nutter, she is a frea… SSSHHHHHH water everywhere,and the girl died’ the girl,now satisfied,went to bed and dreamed of her special route to school,through the water…
Age: 11

Caitlin
This little girl loved swimming under the sea. One day the girl ran away from home she hated her parents and she had no family members because they had all died so she remembered her fish tank she loved fish. They were her best friends she hadn’t seen them in a while the first thing that popped into her head was I’ll go live with the fish they’ll want me.

So she went and lived with the fish bearing in mind that it was 9:59 it was dark luckily she remembered she packed a lamp she went under water with a lantern still lit she swam and swam and swam life was amazing ( at that point ) until her parents found out were she had gone they came looking for her the next day but unfortunately they found her dead on the sand they were devastated.

Age: 10
Molly 
A girl was on a mountain. Her name was Charlotte, she had brown hair that flowed in the wind. Charlotte ran down the mountain and a flash of light flew across her face. She quickly turned around, it moved like it was dancing across the sky. She chased it to the sea, Charlotte snatched a lamp from a boat. She jumped into the sea, at the same time she caught the dancing light but in fury the light trapped both of them under water for eternity. Until a boy named George, saw her and rescued her from the spell. Both of them suddenly fell in love and they travelled the world. The dancing light has never been seen since so if you see a dancing light don’t chase it.

Age: 10

Matthew 
One day on a tropical island a girl called Sophie longed to be back on the mainland with all the rest of the people in the world rather than being on island by herself even though is was a lovely site she still wanted to go home. If your wondering how she got there well this is how it began
Sophie and her family were flying to South America when suddenly the pilot said “fasten up we will be having some turbulence” but it wasn’t, it was the engines over heating.In a sudden moment the plane was going down and it crashed down into the sea and Sophie was the only one to survive. 
So she tries to find a way to get home her latest attempt was swimming away but It never work.

Her final attempt was to build a raft with a sail and of she went into the distance in search of rescue.
Age: 10

Jessica b
One day me and my family went on a boat trip . We sank I felt really scared and swam to the closest island.IT was a mythical island called Mako island.There was spiders and poisonous snakes.Suddenly something darted right at me.I stopped walking, for a minute I thought it was a shark but sharks can’t live put of water can they?I turned around it was a, SHARKMAN.I ran but slipped down a hole in the rocks.Sometime later I found a cave with astonishingly glowing blue water.I slipped into the water it started bubbling and I magically turned into a mermaid.A tale fins.I seem threw the ocean and turned to my natural self.

Age: 8

Story Starts November 2015 “The wolf wood”


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A superb number of entries for this rather scary look at the Red Riding Hood story. Well done to all involved and please leave a comment.

Isla

The eye in the sky!

Alice had become accustomed to cutting through Blackwood forest on her way home from school. At first she had found it dark and creepy walking through the wild, eerie woodland. Her gran had bought her an iPod for Christmas, she used the music to drown out the howling wind. Her mother had often told her legends of how the forest could see and hear all! Alice took no notice and continued to walk through the forest. One blustery November evening, Alice wrapped her favorite scarlet cloak tightly around her. The temperature started to drop. She was nearly home now. Suddenly a gust of wind knocked her over! She felt something watching her. She looked up at the sky. She was horrified at what she saw staring at her! It was an eye in the sky …

Age: 9

Sam

It was coming for me! The dark figure towered above the shadowy, mysterious trees. It had huge luminous eyes and teeth as sharp as a knife. It seemed to blend in with the trees, dark and swirling. I was running for my life now and no matter how fast I went it still kept up with me. I could see, even by looking at its shadow on the floor that the monster, the mammoth, life threatening monster, was glaring down at me like an eagle spying his prey. Once I dared to look up I saw that it was the most terrifying thing that you would see, a wolf as black as night! Suddenly, without any warning, it dived down its teeth bared, its eyes red with anger and-…I woke up gasping, I felt my forehead I was sweating. ‘It didn’t eat me?’ I thought, confused.

Age: 9

Lilly

Hauntingly, the eye swooped down to catch the screaming girl.  She ran from it as fast as she could…but it was catching up fast.  Carly kept running from the majestic, glowing creature as it chased her through the forest.  She ran into a tree and crashed to the ground.

Slowly and cautiously she found the courage to stand and saw the eye glaring at her evilly.  “What do you want?”  She cried tensely.  “YOU’RE LIFE!” the creature shouted.  The girl tried to escape the haunting wrath but the evil thing grew hands out of the sides of his eye and grabbed her and threw her to the ground!  “Think you can run away from me huh?”  “Leave me ALONE!” Carly demanded.  “I can’t” he said meanly “I need food”, Carly stood up while the monster was distracted.  She hit it and ran for her life…

Age: 9

Jake

Once upon a time a boy called Zach went to visit the graveyard were his favourite nanna was buried. Every day he visited the graveyard and prayed at her headstone and, put fresh flowers there.

One day Zach arrived at the graveyard at his normal time and for some reason when he got to his Nanas gravestone it wasn’t there anymore! He looked around and usually a busy graveyard with lots of people visiting their relations there was no one about.

He ran home very frightened to tell his granddad and his mum but when he got home no one was around and all the windows and doors were creaking and banging open and shut in the wind. “OH dear” Zach shouted where has everybody gone, I am all alone and very very scared. He sat down with fright…………………..

To be continued

Age: 9

Niall

The Wood of the Wolf’s Mouth

Once upon a time, Sam, who was 7 and his big sister, Isabel who was 15, lived with their parents in a cottage in the woods. They all lived happily together.

One day Sam and Isabel were playing Truth or Dare and Sam gave Isabel the scariest dare of her life; it was to walk through The Wood of the Wolf’s Mouth and she had to dress up as Little Red Riding Hood to do it. So they asked their mum to make a Little Red Riding Hood costume for Isabel. Then Isabel set out on her dare. Once she entered the cursed woods, she knew there was no going back.

The creaking of the trees in the wind sounded like the jaws of the wolf slowly creaking shut. She turned round to see the trees forming a blockade in front of the only exit. She ran towards the exit….

Age: 10

Joseph

There once was in the town of Azkaban a tiny girl called Kelly who had amazing, mind blowing ambitions. One day her Mother told her to go into the deep, dark woods to get some juicy, red apples. She said no because secretly she was scared of the woods because she had heard myths and legends about them. One of them was a man who had seen a massive eye and died in shock. She only went because her mum would give her £10 if she did. So she went, and the first thing she did was spot a tree full of delicious apples. She ran towards it and as she did she saw a massive eyeball and suddenly put her head down. Scared, worried, petrified she knew it was the end and she died. It won’t be long surely before someone else will come and regrettably die of shock.

Age: 9

Mia

That spooky night Jessica woke up in a fearsome forest!  Wondering where she was?? Suddenly there was a shrieking sound coming from behind her!!   So she ran in the other direction but she was heading the wrong way, she did not know it.   She spotted a mystery key on the dirty floor, she picked up the key and dusted the mud of it.  Through the mist a creepy door appeared in the distance, she looked up and headed towards it.  When she approached it she wriggled the key in the lock to open it, but the door was stuck solid and she had to shove it with her shoulder.  Then it burst open!

On the other side of the creepy door there was more darkness, she stepped inside and the door slammed shut behind her.  She was left alone and scared in another dimension, what was she going to do?  How was she going to get out of this one………

Age: 9

Harry

It was a cold, misty night, everyone was fast asleep. But one person wasn’t and that was … Rose. Rose always liked to go out at night and look at the stars. But tonight was different…

Rose went out just after 10 o’clock. She was expecting to see lots of stars but she sadly saw none. All she could see was clouds. The clouds looked like a wolf and this was peculiar.

The clouds started to close in on Rose and Rose began to panic. Suddenly the clouds opened like the wolf was going to howl and that is when Rose began to run. The clouds chased after her until they ran into sunlight.

The sun was shining brightly and the clouds were disappearing. The sky was blue with the sun shining high. Have I been out this long? she was asking herself.

“Rose are you alright? I think you had a dream because you are hot and clammy”. “Oh mum you won’t believe what happened”.

Age: 10

Freya

Once upon a time there live three little wolves zecora, sally and Skyla. One-day sally found a dark forest and it was perfect for hunting. Zecora was the oldest out of all three of the wolves and she didn`t think it was a good idea. Sally was still smiling on the outside (But inside of her mind she was disappointed because zecora didn`t like her idea. Sally still wanted to go in the forest so she did. Furiously, zecora came chasing after us at a stunning speed suddenly skla was gone and nobody has ever gone trying to find her ever again and sally learned a lesson about going into spooky forests and never went into that forest ever again.

Age: 9

Joshua

THE BEAST

What am I going to do! I panicked. The beast was getting closer and closer, it’s wet nose sniffing the air trying to hunt me down. Its gigantic paws thundered along the ground. Its claws scraped along the tree bark.  My heart was pounding and my legs felt like jelly.

Suddenly a storm started to form, and out of the dark haunting fog came a gigantic fiery eye staring down at me. Slowly the creatures mouth opened: inside I could see hundreds of fangs. I closed my eyes in terror. “Kirsty Kirsty!” the creature groaned in a haunting spooky voice.  Expecting to see the monster, I opened my eyes, but instead saw my brother’s eyeballs.

“Kirsty,” he shouted.

“AHHHHHHH,” I screamed, “What are you doing in my room!”

“Mum told me to wake you up.” he replied. Wow, who thought your brother could give you a nightmare.

Age: 9

Jennifer

The Eye of the Wolf.

Alone & terrified, I charged through the forest. I heard it, HOWLING loudly.  I tried to hide, but I couldn’t run fast enough. The howl got louder… and louder. The trees tore my clothes; it was as if they wanted me to get eaten. I darted into a cave and tried to blend in. Luckily, they charged past. I turned to explore the cave and found a box. It was locked. I spotted a key hanging from a nearby tree. Using the key, the box flung open and there was a beautiful wolf pendent inside. I strapped it around my neck and fled home. As I lay in my bed I suddenly felt a sharp pain like 1000 knives tearing at my flesh. There before me stood a WOLF!! It leaped out of my window, but it was too late I realized I had been bitten.

What would happen on the next full moon?

Age: 9

Shaun

Once upon a time there was a little, small girl that was at school one day and was rehearsing a play. She thought about it for ages every night of the things that could go wrong, after a month had passed she was going to bed when she had a vision of it going to plan and everyone doing there very best…Although in the real world somebody fell over then everyone laughed but the highly strict audience. The show was a disaster. That night for her felt like the worst night of her life, when she woke up however she was not in bed yet in a pitch Black Forest the trees like a wolfs fur. She was being watched by who was unknown…

Age: 9

Jessica

The Shadow Wolf

There was once a mysterious forest, many people entered it, few returned. Trembling with fear, survivors reported a creepy dog shaped shadow. Within a day, the survivors went completely insane and lost all memory of their loved ones!

A girl named Serafina Woods was curious about the stories and asked her parents if she could enter the forest, they forbade her. Serafina knew she was going to disobey them and the next night sneaked out to the forest. As she slipped between the tall trees, Serafina suddenly saw a shadow, it wasn’t a dog, it was a wolf! The shadow wolf grabbed Serafina by the neck of her red hood, she screamed but there was no one to hear her. The wolf dragged her underground and she found herself inside a den, all around her were other shadow wolves. Serafina gasped in understanding, the shadow was building himself a pack…

Age:  9

Lauren

In the dark, Erie woods walked little red riding hood. Her name was Scarlet, just like the colour of her cloak Scarlet was lost. The Forrest was a dark, dreary place.

The trees swayed from side to side and created shadows against the dark clouds.  The owls flew low from tree to tree dodging the bats who slept all day and played out only at night.

Suddenly Scarlet tripped over a log. Hitting her head hard on a rock right near the log. she felt dizzy for a moment feeling the gash on her head. Would she ever get home again?

The night was long, the cold set in and Scarlet became scared knowing she had to get back home before her mother realised she was missing.  Mother would be annoyed and worried her little girl was missing, she would never allow her out again.

Age: 9

Isabelle

She had been warned, but it was too late. Slam went the door, as she ran off sprinting rapidly. The family was skittish of the girl. This was the time of Halloween 2013.

The autumn sky was as bright as Zeus’ eyes. Nary a cloud blemished its bliss-blue complexion and the sun was like a glowing medallion pinned to a sheet of white paper.

As sorrowful as a homeless person, the girl survived the lightening and thunder for sure something was following her.  A galaxy of dragonflies fizzed through the beams of light, wings a glair in the magical space between river and air. Suddenly, it wasn’t. Something in the sky was bothering her so bad she felt agitated. It was shaped like an eye a really proficient one. As creepy as death, she was killed in a gruesome way by something in the sky in the sombre forest …

Age: 9

ibby

It was a fine day in Kolas city every blocky thing was in a normal way like it always was. (Angry wolf growls) “Take that you silly, little beasts you try mess with me again I will kill you “exclaimed a mysterious figure. The mysterious person wondered into the town square nobody went there, not after the death of the mayor. The figure pressed a button on the left hand side of the fountain (water splashing) the figure then stepped into the middle of the fountain and fell down the fountain into a secret under water base. “GOOD MORNING MONSEIR KYKEOL ANY NEWS ABOUT `YOU KNOW HER’?” Asked Kyell’s servant “No not yet she must be some were out there!”  Exclaimed Kyell

Meanwhile in a secret underground cave Angelcrafter67 wakes up to find herself in a cage being taken by Lord Hypha …

“HELP!”…

Age: 9

Grace

Amy walked into the eerie woods and as she walked deeper and deeper into the woods, it got darker and darker until Amy could not see where she was going. She looked around but everything was pitch black. Then coming from a tree was a strange green light. She walked over to the tree and she could see a small door. Amy told herself not to go into it but she could not resist from going in. Then she looked but there was no one in the tree, so Amy went in and on the table was a green glowing globe. Amy touched the globe and it stopped glowing!!!!! Something strange happened; she heard something suddenly lock. It was the door. She ran towards the door and tried to open it but she could not. Then she fell over into a tunnel and she could not get back out!!!!!!!!!!

Age: 9

robin

I think that there is someone watching little red riding hood but does she now there is someone looking at her from in the tree. Does the moon have eyes and the moon watching over her every move she does. It could be anything the sky is black the moon is out and the start’s are out to I think the moon and start’s are watching little red riding hood. I do hope they are making sure that she is all right.

They might how her and keeping an eye on her or they do not know her at all they could be wanting to hurt her but I hope they know her because it will be sad if they hurt her. I hope that they don’t hurt her they better know her.

They do now little red riding hood after all they just made sure she was alright.

Age: 12

Sheridan

I wake up and jump up as I’m huffing and puffing my hand moves and gently wipes the sweat from my head, I take off my top and throw it on the ground. I had just witnessed one of the scariest things in my life. A big eye gazing at me as I am running through a forest. Teeth as gold as the sun and fur as black as the night sky. I can’t stop sweating so I go to get a cold glass of water to cool myself down but as I go down I begin to hallucinate and see this eye everywhere. I start heading to the door and immediately I’m in a red coat that looks like a blood moon. As I take steps the leaves start to crunch. I began to hear the wind howling in my ears so I looked back but the creature vanished.

Age: 12

Summer 

Lucy’s grandmother had told her many legends about this wood but Lucy didn’t really believe them. Lucy wanted to take Jinny her pet dog for a walk in the wood, so she wrapped up very warm and off she went. The further she went into the wood it became darker and creepy. Jinny started to walk faster , her ears pointing up. Lucy could hear the wind and other strange noises, she began to feel scared. Jinny started to bark and wanted to run out of the woods. Lucy couldn’t control Jinny any more and had to let her run back home, she knew the way home and Lucy knew she would be safe. 

Lucy was now by herself, frightened and could feel herself about to cry. She heard a very loud howling noise, she looked up into the sky and the legend of the wolfs wood eye was looking down at her.

Age: 9

Story Start October 2015


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Story Start October 2015

Jack

Early one morning, Jeff who was aged 10 had a fall out with his parents because they would not let him watch one of his favourite TV programs. So then he decided to go and have a walk in the fields right next to their house. Later on, Jeff stumbled upon a huge pilons in the shape of people going across the field and over the lake and into the distance. Jeff didn’t know what to do whether to go back and tell his parents or just keep it a secret. He thought for a while but then he finally decided that he would keep it a secret so nobody would find out about the pilons except himself. After he had spent all morning there he then went back to his house and nobody else knew about what he saw.

Age: 9

Jack

In a village, hid behind a colossal hill, the children had broken up for half term. Most families were poor, so the children didn’t have much to play with. All the kids were grumpy and as bored as a cat without it’s string. Towering over the village was a huge hill blocking their view. Hills are pointless: all they do is block your view and create ice, cold shadows.[Although I do like rolling down them!] Timmy and Julie asked their parents what to do. “How about you guys go exploring” suggested their dad. The kids nodded. They set off over the hill. They noticed a purple lake and some odd man shaped pylons. As they drew closer they got an eerie piercing  feeling. They screamed helplessly, but nothing could be done. They turned fully to metal and still remain there today. It was the curse of LAKE SILVERTON!!!

Age:9

jake

once there was a giant,a metal giant called fredric and fredric was a very lonley giant. one day fredric found a forest with sum foxes and they looked very eupheoric so he explained what happened ‘i can only go so far and I’m very lonely .’ So they decided to help him get to the human world, and so they were stroling through the woods and they saw a pack of killer rabitsso the foxes growled and it warned the rabbits to go away but they didn’t so the elderly wolf atacked and killed them all but he was seveirly ingered and died so that left nine so they kept on walking until another wolf fell, the giant looked down and said thanks guys and then climed down a tree,and found himself in the human world and said this is great so he ranchero the long gras and saw the most beautiful woman in his life and as soon as they made eye contact it was love at first sight.After that they got married and lived happy life                           THE END

Age:9

chloe

Every day when I walk to work I walk past the telephone wires and it is just like any normal day.

Where I go to work and sit in my chair with coffee.  I   always buy coffee for everyone. Then we all work on the computers and the computer Wi-Fi works. Then we all go home. But when I was working last night the Wi-Fi flashed of and on.

This morning I was walking to work when I see the telephone wire I seen the weirdest thing in my life. It was a giant electric wire man. It is the electric giants popping up what will we do.  We   created a device that is called a d – link and we installed it in every house it was a brilliant   device. We all went back to work   the following day. Everybody’s   life was now   normal for   ever   now.

It’s   the end

Age:10

Casey

The spider’s web still stood. Its masterful was still standing after so many years. The web was woven so that it looked like a long line of people connected by three single strands of thread. The thread is almost golden when you look up close, but the further away you get the more it looks white.  A river stands behind most of them. The murky water meanders as the river goes on. Sometimes, the river overflows and the bottom of the giant standstill web-people gets wet. Then, after time, it dries and becomes solid. If you go to the top of the people it is fading away but the bottom gets renewed each time the river overflows.The mountain looming in the distance is actually a volcano that has been extinct for a long, long time. It used to be called Mt. Everest.                The spider died so long ago now…

Age: 10

Logan

The ghostly men where all that was left. That was until the nuke exploded. Everyone died but the guardians of the earth, also known as the protectors. They were the only things left. They have a hide out that they always run from because the angles and demons always battle there every 4 days. They always unfortunately get caught in battles by getting a sword through there chest that’s why they have wholes through there body.

Age: 11

Glenn

Today I saw the weirdest thing in the world I saw telephone wire powered giants. So yesterday the power went out and never came on engineers and others who know a lot about electricity they all went and followed telephone wire trailing’s where the giants have sucked out the electricity and just left them. But suddenly a telephone wire pole fell and started rolling down a hill to where they were and nearly turned them into mincemeat. But it still caught one of the humans and they were stuck in between a tree but they escaped and caught up with the team then they saw the weird giants that sucked up the electricity it was so dangerous for them so they ran strait back to there home town with the giants following them that was the worst idea they ever made but the saviour of the city destroyed them.

Age:11

Caitlin

The Power out

One day there was a power out. We went to our nanas house she told me about the power people. The power people were telephone connecters that search across the world for that special thing but with every good story there is a bad guy. It was called the storm the storm cut all the power from a village and kept it for him. So the people set a plan to destroy the storm but wasn’t a good idea the storm was a man but he could control all the storms. But one day they defeated him they took his power sores from his chest and now he is a slave after spending 25 years in prison.

Age:10

will

one day there were some pylons shaped as people. All the pylons came alive and they decided to go for a walk through the countryside. The people who lived in the countryside were not happy. The pylons went to the city. The people of the city where terrified. back in the countryside the people where building a trap so when the pylons got back they would get stuck.The trap was a big pit with a false floor. When the pylons got back they fell in the pit and from now on electric wires stayed under ground. The people from the countryside were very happy and they didn’t have to look at the messy people pylons ever again.

Age: 9

Carla

There was once a gate that had never been opened. The gate had just mysteriously appeared there one night. It is said, that on the other side of the immense wooden gate there are some keys. These keys open the haunted house on the other side of the forest. Legend tells of treasures being hidden inside. No one has seen the other side… until now! Ten year old Lizzy was wandering home from school when the grand  gate caught her attention. She stood and admired it. Suddenly a loud creaking noise came from the gate… was it opening for the first time?

Age: 9

Maxwell

As Joe walked along the side of the hill,breathing deeply, he could make out strange shapes throughout the dark,quiet and misty area of Carlterfields Bay. He walked cautiously along the shore, making sure he didn’t slip on any pesky, slippery rocks. He could still see the misty shapes of what seemed like huge, massive people. Was it just him hallucinating, or were they moving… Joe was 11, so he thought he was going mad, but a little bit of him was convinced this was real. He had to get home, and fast. He knew it was dangerous to be out after 8 o’clock. He turned back to go home. Suddenly, he was blocked by enormous, iron cables. He looked up to see two large, yellow eyes staring back at him. He screamed, and ran. He ran all the way back home and told her what happened. What a mistake…

Age: 9

Georgina

There was a man that has a little girl called Rosie and they both lived near some telephone wires. One day the dad went out to get some food because Rosie was old enough to stay in the house on her own.The dad normally went with Rosie but they didn’t need to now.When the dad was gone Rosie heard a knock on the door ,she stood and waited for a minute and then she slowly walked towards the door.She opened the door and it was a man made from the telephone wires she screamed and then ran into her room. The looked out the window and there sh saw 10 gigantic wire men coming the outdoors.She shouted her dad and she didn’t get a answer.She did it again but there was no answer.She was starting to get really scared.Then there was a knock….

Age: 9

Lily

The Cotton People

Once there was a family of 4. They went on a walk to over Flowing River. The reason why it is called Over Flowing River is it keeps on over flowing and it is a river. Archeologists believe it has cotton on one side to another side. But when the family went they saw cotton people as tall as giants on one side to another, so they went to find researchers to find what had happened. 1 week later they went to see what the researchers had done. Apparently in the olden days they started to make cotton people right where the river is now and because the river has stopped over flowing it has been getting shallow, shallow because it hasn’t rained very much so less water and the cotton people are coming up as the water goes down.

Age: 9

Elise

He stood there waiting, he had dreamed of the day to be able go across the river. Anything would be better than his tiny, dull village the same routine every day. The only problem was he was the only elf who wanted it. He had explained to his uninterested mother and equally as bored father. The dinky, elfin elf slouched on the village farm. He cried out to the equally as tiny, miniature villagers “Why won’t any of you help?” Just then he heard a rock move.“I can help you,” echoed a booming voice. The elf’s body froze. He saw how the rock became a mammoth giant. Elf’s voice had miraculously disappeared. All of the other rocks became giants and held hands. They formed a bridge for Elf. Elf went over the bridge and left. The Rock Giants had to wait till next time before they could help again.

Age: 10

Oliver

‘Pylon People’
They cautiously hiked up the side of the vast mountain. They were surveying the colossal, immense iron pylons that stood high, carrying electricity which would be transported to their isolated, impoverished village that had never experienced electricity before.
Their village lay in the mountains of Pitlochry in Scotland and was extremely peaceful, although sometimes it was too peaceful. Having the electricity would bring light and power to their village.
They started descending down towards the beautiful iron statues which lay in front of them. On their way down they had to avoid brambles and nettles that stood in their way and even an aggressive bull that ambled towards them.
It was a distressing journey but was worth it as they approached the pylons. They used their engineering skills to allow the flow of electricity to their village. The day’s work was worth it as it gave light to their village.

Age: 9

Dan

Pylon People
“Hi I am a pylon ,”said the first pylon.
“I am too,” said another.
“lets do it for a day,” said both.
“we have done enough electricity charging,” said both of them.
Next ,they saw a shop and powered it up and went back to there spot.
Finally, they finished it.
the end.

Age: 9

Eddie

The pylons are very still, at least thats what we thought. The pylons were awoken as the ground shook……Snap Snap Snap went the wires as they stretched. They grew legs, they grew arms and suddenly turned into giants. They went on an adventure into a village called Silverdale. The pylons met some children called Tom and Amy, “Where have you come from?” Tom asked. The pylons led them to Silverdale mountain. They didn’t realise at the time but Tom and Amy were being watched by a beady eye. Boooooom!!! They turned into pylons and were never seen again. Who did this to them ?? Would they ever be normal again ?? The mystery of the beady eye.

Age: 9

Heather

The giants arms were aching. They had been holding wires up for decades. They were the powerful wire giants!The giants travel around the world. They were in valley surrounded by deep water! Luckily for the giants they had all made it across the river the first time. All of the giants began to go to sleep.

In the morning they woke up. But to their dismay the water had rose! The giants could not get back across the water! They all really wanted to get across the water. As time went by they still could not get back.

After five long years the water became low enough for the wire giants to cross. But when the people saw them they screamed and ran! The giants went back to the water surrounded valley.

Age: 9

Story Starts October 16th 2015


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We are back!! After far too long away we have restarted the story starts activity and here it is. A small amount this month but it will get better! Please leave a comment or two and if you haven’t tried before…GET WRITING!

Angel
Once,lived a dragon named spike who liked to see the large castle everyday. But a knight called Mike stopped him and tried to kill him . spike took out some of his teeth and killed the knight by using the tooth as a whole broomstick and chucked it up the Knight’s nose! The end.

Age:

10

Tyler
In a faraway town people were admiring there work. Night  came, and it glowed. Their castle. The child would be  born tomorrow. It was, and it wasn’t a boy but a girl. Princess Sydney. She grew and was loved until one day; The doors closed. Night fell and light didn’t recover. Years past as this monster figure blotted out the sun. The doors to the castle started to disappear and no one could enter. Then a dragon, its head the size of Germany, landed. It said it was sent from space to deliver a message. A message of death. It said it needed food, Royal food. He needed the Princess. She was growing; she was 13 now and didn’t want to get eaten. She stood her ground and challenged the dragon to a dual. The princess disappeared. There then gone. No one found her, and the dragon smiled and left.

Age:

10
Emily
Everything was peaceful in Disneyland. The birds sang in the trees, the sun descended above the town in the brilliant blue sky shining happiness across the land, harmoniously.
Inside the palace the King, Queen and their Daughters, Evie and Rosie; were having breakfast at their vast dining table with no worry in the air.
Until it suddenly began to grow dark and all of them worries suddenly began to replace the happy atmosphere with a tense one. A great dragon’s head peered through the dining room window and the family looked back at it in monstrosity. They recognised immediately that it was maleficent.
The King was furious, they had had a numerous amount of mishaps with maleficent before and they always ended the same way, the kingdom needed endless repairing to be done. Everybody was petrified, Rosie and Evie screamed and hid.
Disney land was never the same after that occurence.

Age:

10

Casey
The creepy dragon loomed over everyone like a giant lizard. It’s great, orange eyes illuminated in the dark. The dragon’s scaly skin was the colour green as it was covered with seaweed. But, if you look really close you can see that it is actually purple. What were its origins? No one knows anything about it apart from the fact that one day he just majestically appeared out of nowhere. It landed on top of an old attraction at Disneyland, Florida.
Then, all of a sudden, it just disappeared. The great, towering dragon had just disappeared. Nobody could think of an explanation. After all, why would a massive beast of a dragon that had been sitting there for so many years just suddenly decide to disappear? It just didn’t make sense.
Eventually, people stopped inquiring and the whole thing was soon forgotten about it. But, someone knew what had happened…

Age:

10
Jenson
Far far away in a deserted kingdom there was a new castle. A royal family recently moved into the grand and sparkling castle on the far end of the dark coast! The family moved there for a few long weeks but the princess couldn’t settle in. She had a funny feeling it was haunted!
The king and queen were angry with the princess and told her not to be silly.
The princess decided to run back to her old kingdom. Just as she reached the end of the deserted kingdom she felt a warm breathe on the back of her neck…
Suddenly some sharp teeth viciously lifted her off the ground and gulped her down in one. The ferocious beast ran to the castle and destroyed it and everything inside it.
Weeks later builders produced another sparkling castle and a new royal family are moving in…

Age:

8