The metal maiden

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It all started when I looked out the window and saw a women, but no ordinary woman, a woman made of metal from cars and bikes but she could fly. It was amazing a woman who could fly. but the metal began to rust and if it got rusty she would die. so she went to the scrapyard to find more metal to help but there was no metal of her kind so she was bound to die and nothing could help. Unless she visited another scrapyard but she couldn’t cross any motorways in case she was seen but she did it any ways and was caught and captured and was put in a museum and was never seen again.
Glenn Age: 11

The colossal, heavy iron lady stood on the lonely grass. Her cogs and pistons interlocked, she stared ahead for what seemed like forever. 

Years passed. Tourists came and went, photographs were taken. But then, after a long time, no-one came. 

One day, some strange men, in a green uniform arrived, dismantled her and took her away. No-one ever saw the Metal Maiden again.

Casey age 11

I had a really good life before my horrible mum sent me to a metal dump when I was four. Will I ever go back I thought? Three consecutive years past! But different happened, so one day I went for a walk and I ended up in a amusing field. After a few days, someone come up to me, gently touched me on the shoulder and whispered “I know what it feels like,” then walked away. Puzzled and confused, I stud there thinking, what was that about? I turned to an angle and saw that an enormous person, made of metal, was standing right behind me “is it real?” I said to myself. Suddenly, I realised it was the girl that came up to me! What happened I thought still puzzled. After a week it was still there but pieces had fallen off. I was thinking in my head is she magic?
Ruby age: 8


Story Start Nov 2015 “The girl of the sea”

girl in the sea

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One day there was a young girl called Lucy age 7.

She was having a swim until she suddenly… She drowned but she could breath under water just like a shark. She stayed under water forever but people said they saw her. Some people thought she was dead no one ever found the body. A 10-year-old boy called James knew what had happened a new species a vampire shark he said its name was a vompshark that he made up had bit her. She wasn’t dead she lived like a shark for ever she never died. She is still living today. James was the only person who knew because no one ever believed him.

Age: 8




This little girl lives a normal life with a normal family but what they don’t know is that this young girl is aqua girl a brave and fearsome girl she protects the seas with her life but one day an old friend showed up in a bad mood he came with an army of bull sharks tiger shark’s great white sharks and a couple of megaladons “you shall bow to me” said the giant thing in the ocean the little girl called the strongest fish around to defend the rest of the fish the little girl was hit and knocked out but she woke after the fight it was the same as before the fight “we won yeah” the man was nowhere to be seen but he said “ I’ll be back soon and when I am you’ll pay” then the man ran off in a hurry the fish gathered round and said thank you.

Age: 10



There was once an eleven-year-old girl called Jenny. One day, something strange happened, her fourteen-year-old brother Joshua went scuba diving. When he didn’t return home that night, Jenny’s parents got worried and went out looking for Josh. Jenny wanted to look for him too, but nobody would let her. Jenny had a secret power that nobody knew about, she could breathe under water. The following day, Jenny sneaked out to look for her brother in the sea. It was very scary and dark underwater, but Jenny kept on searching, using a lantern to light the sea. Eventually she found him lost in a secret underwater cave. “Jenny, you’ve found me!” Said Josh!” Do you know the way out?”

“Follow me,” she said. She led him home and they got dry. Afterwards Jenny told them all about her special power and they were very happy together!

Age: 9



As the girl stands above the sea the frothy waves splash, she wonders what it would be like being amongst the fish and the seaweed. The girl (only 8) lives in a poor part of London, she can’t cope at home, with her arguing, her brother always causing trouble. She is the brains of the family, never in any trouble. She was thinking about all of this when suddenly she felt a tug on her leg, she was pulled into the sea. The eerie darkness underneath the sea shocked the girl. She swam around, she spotted some fish which proceeded to swim with her. Her left foot was still being tugged on by whatever was taking her. She was overpowered and couldn’t swim anymore, she was gasping for air, the overwhelming events that had taken place over the last few seconds really shocked her. She was buried under the sea

Age: 10



It was a Monday morning at school again. Everyone hates Monday mornings in my school. For my entire life I wanted to be a swimmer. It was the 20th of November and the time was 6am, I decided to go for a swim in the sea. Something just didn’t feel right, it was dark and very misty. I had a very strange feeling. I went back to shore to pick up my lantern, as I turned around and the glow off the lantern hit the water, I could not believe what I could see…….

Age: 10


it all starts in the ocean with a little girl, or should I say little mermaid. well it started with her swimming in the ocean she swam and swam to the depth of the ocean where her and her family lives its weird because humans said for her to have no sort of fishy look just two scales on her face she protects well that’s the end of it

Age: 11



I am genifa I go swimming with my dad every weekend. There was a hole in the floor of the pool I said to my dad look dad there’s a hole. We carried on swimming and I swan one length I got my foot stuck in the hole and I shouted dad I’m drowning he said I’m coming I said help but bye the time he hot there I was gone. There we’re see animals everywhere I will enjoy it down hear anyway but what will I do no food no friends. Anyway 3 hours passed by I found a turtle friend he was friendly I miss my dad lots but I will eat the sea weed I will find another group of friends I’m sure the next day I came back up the hole and saw my dad I was so happy my mum and dad we’re there looking at the hole and crying so I pop out of the hole and say surprise I’m back they screen and cry even more I jump out and say hello I missed you I’m glad to see you

Age: 10




I wake up from my deep slumber. I slowly get out of the overturned, rusty cage that has kept me imprisoned for as long as I can remember. I pick up my ever glowing lantern as I set about stretching my legs.

“I should have done this a few thousand years ago,” I manage, my voice being gurgled by the on going flow of water.

Oblivious to the fish, big or small, I try to find my way around. After a while, I start to get used to moving my “leg” about. All of a sudden, I feel a pain that goes deep down to the bone. It seems to have come from at the bottom of my body. I look at my damaged Mermaid’s tail and decide to rest it. So I swim back to my cage, curling up into a ball and falling asleep.

I haven’t woken up yet…

Age: 10



One misty morning as I woke up I had a funny dream where I was walking through the hall and I heard a creek but it was only my Dad. He started walking towards me. I didn’t know what to do, but then he started to speak to me. Dad said “find that scroll, find it.” I reply “what scroll?” but by then he had all ready gone.

Age: 8


The girl and the lamp

It was a stormy day in 1896 when … Heidi set sail with her parents. They where leaving Timbuctoo to go to the enchanted kingdom. They were half way across codeye sea when … Heidi jumped in to see what the bright light was at the bottom of the ocean. And it was a bright firing roaring lantern and the lantern belonged to the mermaids of the sea. They used it so they could see were the crispy seaweed was that they loved for there tea. When they met Heidi they became very good friends with her they told Heidi a secret that the lamp was magical and she could have two wishes Heidi wished to be a mermaid for the day and and to take some crispy seaweed back to mum and dad for tea and both of her wishes came true!

Age: 8


There was a young girl who was called Emily and she loved myths about the sea. So when see had a couple of hours see went diving in the Caribbean. She took a lantern with her, so that she could see if there was anything valuable under the sea. She was looking for shark’s teeth or treasure, so Emily and her dad could afford a better house. Her mum had died in a car crash and it left her and her dad with little money as her dad was only a fisherman.

Suddenly she was surrounded by Manta Rays and her only option was to hide in a dark and gloomy cave. But then, out of the corner of her eye she saw an object and it appeared to be a treasure chest. She tried to carry it up to the surface but it was too much for her, so she whistled to the dolphins and they helped her carry it to the coast. She opened it and found emeralds, a lot of gold coins and a giant ruby. She sold them all at the market and made a lot of money and spent it on a better house and things they needed.

Age: 8


A ten-year-old girl was having an evening stroll down the grassy bank of lake Windermere when she saw an eerie glow in the depths of the lake about three metres away.

So she slowly waded in (only because she was inquisitive) then the water got too deep and the ground beneath her vanished. The water was freezing but she gathered herself together and dived down into the icy depths. Suddenly everything was black but then she caught sight of the light and swam towards it.

Age: 8



Here is a short story about how I discovered a talking fish. I was swimming through the sapphire sea with a lamp. There were amazing bizarre creatures swimming around me. Suddenly! I saw a cave. I swam near it and then I went inside it … TREASURE everywhere! As I swam into the dark gloomy cave, my lamp lit the rubies, gold and pearls, lighting a rainbow around me. But suddenly my blonde long hair got caught between the smooth rocks. I was determined to escape, even if it meant losing my beautiful beloved hair! Just then, my luck was in as a friendly, talking, weird fish swam into the cave. The pink spiky big eyed fish realised I was desperate to get away so she kindly untangled my hair quickly. The creature said “hello nice to meet you”. I replied “thank you, nice to meet you too”.

Age: 9



“Good night James!” cheered Hanna “Good night Hanna!” called James. Hanna was a kind girl she loved her little brother James.

Hanna went to sleep, she was very comfy and cozy that night, she woke up in a wonderful mood only to find that she wasn’t in her bed…she was on a sea bed!! She went to have a look around and noticed that she could speak and breathe under water. Then this fish came and started speaking to her. The fish said something about his friend Casper being stuck underneath a rock. Hanna said she would like to help. The two new friends swam to the little fish, luckily Hanna was a human so she was able to lift the rock. Now it was nighttime in the sea world and when Hanna woke up in the morning she was back in her own bed and it turned out it was all just a dream.

Age: 9


In the ocean a girl called Nancy had been made to walk the plank by Mully the pirate. She sunk to the bottom and saw a dark cave. Nancy swam into it and saw it was full of shiny jewels. On her way she saw the skeletons of the others who had walked the plank before but had not made it out alive.

She picked up a handful of glittering rubies and put them in the bag that the pirates had given her. Nancy turned to swim out of the cave but just then she felt a bony hand touching her bag. She slowly turned around and saw a SKELETON rip open her bag and the rubies scattered on the rocks.

Nancy managed to grab one ruby without the skeleton noticing and swam to the surface.

As she came up for air the pirates were waiting for their treasure.

Age: 9


My name is Sofia,

and I am on search for treasure, you may ask how I can breathe under water as I am human, but I stole some gills off a fish and now I can breathe under water and search what I am looking for. a wise old fisherman once told me if I ever get the chance of going to the mysterious land of arkor to look out for the 3 fragments of the core of aslon beneath this will be treasure and lots of it, but!!! there will be one problem auto pilot fish guard this area and the master Lucas is controlling them the only way to stop them is to use the light of the special admanita lantern I hold that was passed down from my Grandpa.

wish me luck guys I am feeling brave and hoping my gills will stay in place until I get to the mysterious land of arkor.

Age: 8


A girl was walking on the shore of the beach. It was night time and she had a lamp her Mum said it was waterproof. She was walking and a gust of wind threw her into the sea. It was cold and very ruff all of a sudden. When the sea calmed down she went for a swim in the middle of the night. It is a strange time to swim but she did it anyway. Then she realized she could breath under water. She saw a lovely sight she saw a clown fish and named him Nemo and went back to her parent’s for a lovely bath.

Age: 8



Tess was an eleven-year-old girl. One day she went diving with her friends. She had been waiting for this day to come for weeks, months… and maybe even years. Tess shot out of bed that day, rushed her breakfast got changed did all that stuff and stood by the door. After half an hour it was finally time to go. When she got there her friends were there all ready. When it was time they dived in. “Woooooooow!” they exclaimed. The sea was beautiful. Suddenly, Tess took a wrong turn. She was lost. She turned on her lantern and suddenly saw sharks surrounding her. She was not that exited now.

Age: 8

The Whale and Bella.
As the girl swam deep in the ocean looking for the exit out of the blue gloomy sea, she heard a noise, a noise of a whale, like an Orca.  

The Orca appeared and said “hi little one, what are you doing down here in the blue gloomy sea,”.  

The girl was amazed when she heard the Orca talk and she explained everything to the whale.  

“Well you see I was on the beach with my parents, and a big wave pulled me into the sea, and here I am,”.  

The girl started to cry, then the whale decided to help the girl, and they became friends.  

“My name is Bella,” whimpered the girl whilst she cleared her eyes.

“My name is just Whale,” said the Orca with depression.

The Orca hated his name he wanted something fancy, but Bella and Whale couldn’t decide quick enough, because…

Age: 11


Madeline had gone to visit her grandparents who lived by the sea. That night something strange happened it was a full moon and the water started to rise into the house.The water was lashing against the door and windows trying to get in.Suddenly all the water rushed into the house and flooded all the rooms.To Madeline’s surprise she was able to breathe .Although it was cold and dark she could see because of the lamp off her bed side table.She went off exploring the house looking for her grandparents. To her amazement they to could breathe under water and were having a party with her family. So she joined in as a family tradition.
Age: 8

My amazing adventure started when I sat down at my dressing table to brush my hair. I realised that the reflection looking back at me wasn’t mine. I reached forward to touch the glass and it turned to water beneath my fingers. Before I knew it I had stepped through into a mysterious underwater world. Beside me was a lantern which I picked up to help me explore this strange new place. As I swam along my attention was drawn towards an old shipwreck lying on the sea bed. At first I thought I was alone, but then I noticed that a dolphin was playfully swimming along beside me. We swam together towards the shipwreck and started to explore. It must have been a big boat as there was lots to explore and I was able to imagine how amazing this boat must have been. Something shiny caught my eye and we both squeezed through a tight space towards it. To my surprise I found a chest full of gold coins and other treasures. Maybe this was pirate loot! I slipped one gold coin into my pocket and decided it was time to leave but that was not going to be so easy. When I tried to swim out the same way my dress got caught on an old rusty nail. I tried desperately to free myself but couldn’t. Just as I was starting to panic I felt something pushing me from behind. It was my dolphin friend! With one gigantic push it freed me and with relief we both left the ship. We spent a little more time exploring this exotic world, looking at wonderful fish and sea creatures. All of a sudden I heard a voice calling me. It sounded like my mother! The voice got louder and louder which seemed to echo around me. All of a sudden I woke in my own bed at home. It took me a moment to realise that my amazing underwater adventure was really just a dream. But as I sat up in bed I felt something cold and hard in my hand. When I opened my hand I saw to my surprise a beautiful gold coin so was it all a dream or was it real?

Age: 9


I cannot bring myself to imagine I am under the mysterious sea seeking for my long lost mother. Just to think that this morning I was told where she was all along, by my grandpa. 
       I was only nine when she left; lots of questions spun around my head, making me perplexed. My father passed away in the war, that’s when my mother disappeared.

       My grandpa finally told me the hidden secret; that my mother was a mermaid and needed to go back to her kingdom. When my grandpa confessed to me, I felt a mixture of emotions, I didn’t know whether to cry or be furious. My face must have not had any expression at all.  So here I am under the sea anxiously looking for my mother; I inherited her quality to breathe underwater. As I swim further, a kingdom slowly forms in front of my startled eyes.

Age: 10

There was a girl who dreams of being a mermaid .And her mum thought that it was to dangros so she did not not spend time after she said that . She loved dolting and she wanted to swim with them in greas but she was poor and she ate mud and pig. But there was one thing she did like and thats being helpfull and helping sea animals. But she loved having food aswell and talling dolting and the wied thing is that they have a frened relashinonship with the oteas as well 
One night she wished to go to greece and the next moring she was uder water with doltings and she woken up with a tall and she did not like what was haping becuse she cold not swim and she was trired but then she sore a person but she never new that it was her mum
Age: 10


As i dive in to the cold dark ocean i feel a cold breeze running through me as i light a lamp i see everything . my lamp does not get dimmer . 

all around me there is multicoulred fish of all speicies . as i land on the ocean ground i see a door is i slowly .. carefully walk the door opens as i begin to turn back ,. i wonder how i got here in the first place maybe im not a human i might be a murmaid . what i always wanted to be but shhh dont tell any one at al and…………………..
Age 10


One minute I was holding the old lantern next the monster wave pulled me under. I closed my eyes waiting for something to happen but nothing did. I was still conscious after about 5 minutes of sinking into the dark depths of the sea.

Flickers of light came to my eyes, I opened them. The lantern was still lit. Then I realised I was breathing. It was all a blur at first then I could see fish swimming round. I swam for what seemed like hours looking at the wonders of the sea. I came to a ship wreck the eeriness of the sea hit me as I passed through the grimy beams. I saw a light quite close. As I got closer I could see a dark figure. It was a human a human boy. He had the same lantern 

Now me and the boy swim round every corner of the sea. We are the children of the sea.

Age: 11
The girl swims under water, as the lantern shines the way like a dangler fish. She swims calm and peacefully without bothering the fish, exploring and looking for treasure. Having no sharks chasing her she’s safe from being devoured. Or is she?
Age: 10

As the girl of the sea swims down the town of Sinon Omsvile wishes to go home, well she does not have a lot of memorys of land. They stopped sending out massive search party 2 years ago sines are island sank 3 years ago. they sent out massive search ships and guess what they haven’t even found us.I bet you are thinking how I can I breath under water, well we all were injected before we sunk with an secret formula by a government experiment to breath underwater, half human half fish, for when are island sunk because of an earthquake. My nextdoor neighbour does not like water,he is always complaining about being wet, but I do ,and fish fascinating things they are no arms no legs just yousin there body to move.

Age: 10


The young girl logs onto the old,slow loading laptop, she opens up a page and types in ‘russbrownauthor’ she then logs onto her teachers website. She starts to write.

             ‘Dear Diary’ she starts the story.She thinks about how she wants her story to be different so she looks deeply into the eyes of the girl whom she is mean to write about,She knows what to right.’there is a girl in my class at school,year 6 and this girl’ she thinks of her friends Ellie Emily Molly etc… She chooses Ellie ‘now Ellie is just weird she actually swims to school and she’s under there for hours, i just don’t understand, its insane,unnatural .She is a nutter, she is a frea… SSSHHHHHH water everywhere,and the girl died’ the girl,now satisfied,went to bed and dreamed of her special route to school,through the water…
Age: 11

This little girl loved swimming under the sea. One day the girl ran away from home she hated her parents and she had no family members because they had all died so she remembered her fish tank she loved fish. They were her best friends she hadn’t seen them in a while the first thing that popped into her head was I’ll go live with the fish they’ll want me.

So she went and lived with the fish bearing in mind that it was 9:59 it was dark luckily she remembered she packed a lamp she went under water with a lantern still lit she swam and swam and swam life was amazing ( at that point ) until her parents found out were she had gone they came looking for her the next day but unfortunately they found her dead on the sand they were devastated.

Age: 10
A girl was on a mountain. Her name was Charlotte, she had brown hair that flowed in the wind. Charlotte ran down the mountain and a flash of light flew across her face. She quickly turned around, it moved like it was dancing across the sky. She chased it to the sea, Charlotte snatched a lamp from a boat. She jumped into the sea, at the same time she caught the dancing light but in fury the light trapped both of them under water for eternity. Until a boy named George, saw her and rescued her from the spell. Both of them suddenly fell in love and they travelled the world. The dancing light has never been seen since so if you see a dancing light don’t chase it.

Age: 10

One day on a tropical island a girl called Sophie longed to be back on the mainland with all the rest of the people in the world rather than being on island by herself even though is was a lovely site she still wanted to go home. If your wondering how she got there well this is how it began
Sophie and her family were flying to South America when suddenly the pilot said “fasten up we will be having some turbulence” but it wasn’t, it was the engines over heating.In a sudden moment the plane was going down and it crashed down into the sea and Sophie was the only one to survive. 
So she tries to find a way to get home her latest attempt was swimming away but It never work.

Her final attempt was to build a raft with a sail and of she went into the distance in search of rescue.
Age: 10

Jessica b
One day me and my family went on a boat trip . We sank I felt really scared and swam to the closest island.IT was a mythical island called Mako island.There was spiders and poisonous snakes.Suddenly something darted right at me.I stopped walking, for a minute I thought it was a shark but sharks can’t live put of water can they?I turned around it was a, SHARKMAN.I ran but slipped down a hole in the rocks.Sometime later I found a cave with astonishingly glowing blue water.I slipped into the water it started bubbling and I magically turned into a mermaid.A tale fins.I seem threw the ocean and turned to my natural self.

Age: 8

Story Starts November 2015 “The wolf wood”


A superb number of entries for this rather scary look at the Red Riding Hood story. Well done to all involved and please leave a comment.


The eye in the sky!

Alice had become accustomed to cutting through Blackwood forest on her way home from school. At first she had found it dark and creepy walking through the wild, eerie woodland. Her gran had bought her an iPod for Christmas, she used the music to drown out the howling wind. Her mother had often told her legends of how the forest could see and hear all! Alice took no notice and continued to walk through the forest. One blustery November evening, Alice wrapped her favorite scarlet cloak tightly around her. The temperature started to drop. She was nearly home now. Suddenly a gust of wind knocked her over! She felt something watching her. She looked up at the sky. She was horrified at what she saw staring at her! It was an eye in the sky …

Age: 9


It was coming for me! The dark figure towered above the shadowy, mysterious trees. It had huge luminous eyes and teeth as sharp as a knife. It seemed to blend in with the trees, dark and swirling. I was running for my life now and no matter how fast I went it still kept up with me. I could see, even by looking at its shadow on the floor that the monster, the mammoth, life threatening monster, was glaring down at me like an eagle spying his prey. Once I dared to look up I saw that it was the most terrifying thing that you would see, a wolf as black as night! Suddenly, without any warning, it dived down its teeth bared, its eyes red with anger and-…I woke up gasping, I felt my forehead I was sweating. ‘It didn’t eat me?’ I thought, confused.

Age: 9


Hauntingly, the eye swooped down to catch the screaming girl.  She ran from it as fast as she could…but it was catching up fast.  Carly kept running from the majestic, glowing creature as it chased her through the forest.  She ran into a tree and crashed to the ground.

Slowly and cautiously she found the courage to stand and saw the eye glaring at her evilly.  “What do you want?”  She cried tensely.  “YOU’RE LIFE!” the creature shouted.  The girl tried to escape the haunting wrath but the evil thing grew hands out of the sides of his eye and grabbed her and threw her to the ground!  “Think you can run away from me huh?”  “Leave me ALONE!” Carly demanded.  “I can’t” he said meanly “I need food”, Carly stood up while the monster was distracted.  She hit it and ran for her life…

Age: 9


Once upon a time a boy called Zach went to visit the graveyard were his favourite nanna was buried. Every day he visited the graveyard and prayed at her headstone and, put fresh flowers there.

One day Zach arrived at the graveyard at his normal time and for some reason when he got to his Nanas gravestone it wasn’t there anymore! He looked around and usually a busy graveyard with lots of people visiting their relations there was no one about.

He ran home very frightened to tell his granddad and his mum but when he got home no one was around and all the windows and doors were creaking and banging open and shut in the wind. “OH dear” Zach shouted where has everybody gone, I am all alone and very very scared. He sat down with fright…………………..

To be continued

Age: 9


The Wood of the Wolf’s Mouth

Once upon a time, Sam, who was 7 and his big sister, Isabel who was 15, lived with their parents in a cottage in the woods. They all lived happily together.

One day Sam and Isabel were playing Truth or Dare and Sam gave Isabel the scariest dare of her life; it was to walk through The Wood of the Wolf’s Mouth and she had to dress up as Little Red Riding Hood to do it. So they asked their mum to make a Little Red Riding Hood costume for Isabel. Then Isabel set out on her dare. Once she entered the cursed woods, she knew there was no going back.

The creaking of the trees in the wind sounded like the jaws of the wolf slowly creaking shut. She turned round to see the trees forming a blockade in front of the only exit. She ran towards the exit….

Age: 10


There once was in the town of Azkaban a tiny girl called Kelly who had amazing, mind blowing ambitions. One day her Mother told her to go into the deep, dark woods to get some juicy, red apples. She said no because secretly she was scared of the woods because she had heard myths and legends about them. One of them was a man who had seen a massive eye and died in shock. She only went because her mum would give her £10 if she did. So she went, and the first thing she did was spot a tree full of delicious apples. She ran towards it and as she did she saw a massive eyeball and suddenly put her head down. Scared, worried, petrified she knew it was the end and she died. It won’t be long surely before someone else will come and regrettably die of shock.

Age: 9


That spooky night Jessica woke up in a fearsome forest!  Wondering where she was?? Suddenly there was a shrieking sound coming from behind her!!   So she ran in the other direction but she was heading the wrong way, she did not know it.   She spotted a mystery key on the dirty floor, she picked up the key and dusted the mud of it.  Through the mist a creepy door appeared in the distance, she looked up and headed towards it.  When she approached it she wriggled the key in the lock to open it, but the door was stuck solid and she had to shove it with her shoulder.  Then it burst open!

On the other side of the creepy door there was more darkness, she stepped inside and the door slammed shut behind her.  She was left alone and scared in another dimension, what was she going to do?  How was she going to get out of this one………

Age: 9


It was a cold, misty night, everyone was fast asleep. But one person wasn’t and that was … Rose. Rose always liked to go out at night and look at the stars. But tonight was different…

Rose went out just after 10 o’clock. She was expecting to see lots of stars but she sadly saw none. All she could see was clouds. The clouds looked like a wolf and this was peculiar.

The clouds started to close in on Rose and Rose began to panic. Suddenly the clouds opened like the wolf was going to howl and that is when Rose began to run. The clouds chased after her until they ran into sunlight.

The sun was shining brightly and the clouds were disappearing. The sky was blue with the sun shining high. Have I been out this long? she was asking herself.

“Rose are you alright? I think you had a dream because you are hot and clammy”. “Oh mum you won’t believe what happened”.

Age: 10


Once upon a time there live three little wolves zecora, sally and Skyla. One-day sally found a dark forest and it was perfect for hunting. Zecora was the oldest out of all three of the wolves and she didn`t think it was a good idea. Sally was still smiling on the outside (But inside of her mind she was disappointed because zecora didn`t like her idea. Sally still wanted to go in the forest so she did. Furiously, zecora came chasing after us at a stunning speed suddenly skla was gone and nobody has ever gone trying to find her ever again and sally learned a lesson about going into spooky forests and never went into that forest ever again.

Age: 9



What am I going to do! I panicked. The beast was getting closer and closer, it’s wet nose sniffing the air trying to hunt me down. Its gigantic paws thundered along the ground. Its claws scraped along the tree bark.  My heart was pounding and my legs felt like jelly.

Suddenly a storm started to form, and out of the dark haunting fog came a gigantic fiery eye staring down at me. Slowly the creatures mouth opened: inside I could see hundreds of fangs. I closed my eyes in terror. “Kirsty Kirsty!” the creature groaned in a haunting spooky voice.  Expecting to see the monster, I opened my eyes, but instead saw my brother’s eyeballs.

“Kirsty,” he shouted.

“AHHHHHHH,” I screamed, “What are you doing in my room!”

“Mum told me to wake you up.” he replied. Wow, who thought your brother could give you a nightmare.

Age: 9


The Eye of the Wolf.

Alone & terrified, I charged through the forest. I heard it, HOWLING loudly.  I tried to hide, but I couldn’t run fast enough. The howl got louder… and louder. The trees tore my clothes; it was as if they wanted me to get eaten. I darted into a cave and tried to blend in. Luckily, they charged past. I turned to explore the cave and found a box. It was locked. I spotted a key hanging from a nearby tree. Using the key, the box flung open and there was a beautiful wolf pendent inside. I strapped it around my neck and fled home. As I lay in my bed I suddenly felt a sharp pain like 1000 knives tearing at my flesh. There before me stood a WOLF!! It leaped out of my window, but it was too late I realized I had been bitten.

What would happen on the next full moon?

Age: 9


Once upon a time there was a little, small girl that was at school one day and was rehearsing a play. She thought about it for ages every night of the things that could go wrong, after a month had passed she was going to bed when she had a vision of it going to plan and everyone doing there very best…Although in the real world somebody fell over then everyone laughed but the highly strict audience. The show was a disaster. That night for her felt like the worst night of her life, when she woke up however she was not in bed yet in a pitch Black Forest the trees like a wolfs fur. She was being watched by who was unknown…

Age: 9


The Shadow Wolf

There was once a mysterious forest, many people entered it, few returned. Trembling with fear, survivors reported a creepy dog shaped shadow. Within a day, the survivors went completely insane and lost all memory of their loved ones!

A girl named Serafina Woods was curious about the stories and asked her parents if she could enter the forest, they forbade her. Serafina knew she was going to disobey them and the next night sneaked out to the forest. As she slipped between the tall trees, Serafina suddenly saw a shadow, it wasn’t a dog, it was a wolf! The shadow wolf grabbed Serafina by the neck of her red hood, she screamed but there was no one to hear her. The wolf dragged her underground and she found herself inside a den, all around her were other shadow wolves. Serafina gasped in understanding, the shadow was building himself a pack…

Age:  9


In the dark, Erie woods walked little red riding hood. Her name was Scarlet, just like the colour of her cloak Scarlet was lost. The Forrest was a dark, dreary place.

The trees swayed from side to side and created shadows against the dark clouds.  The owls flew low from tree to tree dodging the bats who slept all day and played out only at night.

Suddenly Scarlet tripped over a log. Hitting her head hard on a rock right near the log. she felt dizzy for a moment feeling the gash on her head. Would she ever get home again?

The night was long, the cold set in and Scarlet became scared knowing she had to get back home before her mother realised she was missing.  Mother would be annoyed and worried her little girl was missing, she would never allow her out again.

Age: 9


She had been warned, but it was too late. Slam went the door, as she ran off sprinting rapidly. The family was skittish of the girl. This was the time of Halloween 2013.

The autumn sky was as bright as Zeus’ eyes. Nary a cloud blemished its bliss-blue complexion and the sun was like a glowing medallion pinned to a sheet of white paper.

As sorrowful as a homeless person, the girl survived the lightening and thunder for sure something was following her.  A galaxy of dragonflies fizzed through the beams of light, wings a glair in the magical space between river and air. Suddenly, it wasn’t. Something in the sky was bothering her so bad she felt agitated. It was shaped like an eye a really proficient one. As creepy as death, she was killed in a gruesome way by something in the sky in the sombre forest …

Age: 9


It was a fine day in Kolas city every blocky thing was in a normal way like it always was. (Angry wolf growls) “Take that you silly, little beasts you try mess with me again I will kill you “exclaimed a mysterious figure. The mysterious person wondered into the town square nobody went there, not after the death of the mayor. The figure pressed a button on the left hand side of the fountain (water splashing) the figure then stepped into the middle of the fountain and fell down the fountain into a secret under water base. “GOOD MORNING MONSEIR KYKEOL ANY NEWS ABOUT `YOU KNOW HER’?” Asked Kyell’s servant “No not yet she must be some were out there!”  Exclaimed Kyell

Meanwhile in a secret underground cave Angelcrafter67 wakes up to find herself in a cage being taken by Lord Hypha …


Age: 9


Amy walked into the eerie woods and as she walked deeper and deeper into the woods, it got darker and darker until Amy could not see where she was going. She looked around but everything was pitch black. Then coming from a tree was a strange green light. She walked over to the tree and she could see a small door. Amy told herself not to go into it but she could not resist from going in. Then she looked but there was no one in the tree, so Amy went in and on the table was a green glowing globe. Amy touched the globe and it stopped glowing!!!!! Something strange happened; she heard something suddenly lock. It was the door. She ran towards the door and tried to open it but she could not. Then she fell over into a tunnel and she could not get back out!!!!!!!!!!

Age: 9


I think that there is someone watching little red riding hood but does she now there is someone looking at her from in the tree. Does the moon have eyes and the moon watching over her every move she does. It could be anything the sky is black the moon is out and the start’s are out to I think the moon and start’s are watching little red riding hood. I do hope they are making sure that she is all right.

They might how her and keeping an eye on her or they do not know her at all they could be wanting to hurt her but I hope they know her because it will be sad if they hurt her. I hope that they don’t hurt her they better know her.

They do now little red riding hood after all they just made sure she was alright.

Age: 12


I wake up and jump up as I’m huffing and puffing my hand moves and gently wipes the sweat from my head, I take off my top and throw it on the ground. I had just witnessed one of the scariest things in my life. A big eye gazing at me as I am running through a forest. Teeth as gold as the sun and fur as black as the night sky. I can’t stop sweating so I go to get a cold glass of water to cool myself down but as I go down I begin to hallucinate and see this eye everywhere. I start heading to the door and immediately I’m in a red coat that looks like a blood moon. As I take steps the leaves start to crunch. I began to hear the wind howling in my ears so I looked back but the creature vanished.

Age: 12


Lucy’s grandmother had told her many legends about this wood but Lucy didn’t really believe them. Lucy wanted to take Jinny her pet dog for a walk in the wood, so she wrapped up very warm and off she went. The further she went into the wood it became darker and creepy. Jinny started to walk faster , her ears pointing up. Lucy could hear the wind and other strange noises, she began to feel scared. Jinny started to bark and wanted to run out of the woods. Lucy couldn’t control Jinny any more and had to let her run back home, she knew the way home and Lucy knew she would be safe. 

Lucy was now by herself, frightened and could feel herself about to cry. She heard a very loud howling noise, she looked up into the sky and the legend of the wolfs wood eye was looking down at her.

Age: 9

Story Starts October 16th 2015


We are back!! After far too long away we have restarted the story starts activity and here it is. A small amount this month but it will get better! Please leave a comment or two and if you haven’t tried before…GET WRITING!

Once,lived a dragon named spike who liked to see the large castle everyday. But a knight called Mike stopped him and tried to kill him . spike took out some of his teeth and killed the knight by using the tooth as a whole broomstick and chucked it up the Knight’s nose! The end.



In a faraway town people were admiring there work. Night  came, and it glowed. Their castle. The child would be  born tomorrow. It was, and it wasn’t a boy but a girl. Princess Sydney. She grew and was loved until one day; The doors closed. Night fell and light didn’t recover. Years past as this monster figure blotted out the sun. The doors to the castle started to disappear and no one could enter. Then a dragon, its head the size of Germany, landed. It said it was sent from space to deliver a message. A message of death. It said it needed food, Royal food. He needed the Princess. She was growing; she was 13 now and didn’t want to get eaten. She stood her ground and challenged the dragon to a dual. The princess disappeared. There then gone. No one found her, and the dragon smiled and left.


Everything was peaceful in Disneyland. The birds sang in the trees, the sun descended above the town in the brilliant blue sky shining happiness across the land, harmoniously.
Inside the palace the King, Queen and their Daughters, Evie and Rosie; were having breakfast at their vast dining table with no worry in the air.
Until it suddenly began to grow dark and all of them worries suddenly began to replace the happy atmosphere with a tense one. A great dragon’s head peered through the dining room window and the family looked back at it in monstrosity. They recognised immediately that it was maleficent.
The King was furious, they had had a numerous amount of mishaps with maleficent before and they always ended the same way, the kingdom needed endless repairing to be done. Everybody was petrified, Rosie and Evie screamed and hid.
Disney land was never the same after that occurence.



The creepy dragon loomed over everyone like a giant lizard. It’s great, orange eyes illuminated in the dark. The dragon’s scaly skin was the colour green as it was covered with seaweed. But, if you look really close you can see that it is actually purple. What were its origins? No one knows anything about it apart from the fact that one day he just majestically appeared out of nowhere. It landed on top of an old attraction at Disneyland, Florida.
Then, all of a sudden, it just disappeared. The great, towering dragon had just disappeared. Nobody could think of an explanation. After all, why would a massive beast of a dragon that had been sitting there for so many years just suddenly decide to disappear? It just didn’t make sense.
Eventually, people stopped inquiring and the whole thing was soon forgotten about it. But, someone knew what had happened…


Far far away in a deserted kingdom there was a new castle. A royal family recently moved into the grand and sparkling castle on the far end of the dark coast! The family moved there for a few long weeks but the princess couldn’t settle in. She had a funny feeling it was haunted!
The king and queen were angry with the princess and told her not to be silly.
The princess decided to run back to her old kingdom. Just as she reached the end of the deserted kingdom she felt a warm breathe on the back of her neck…
Suddenly some sharp teeth viciously lifted her off the ground and gulped her down in one. The ferocious beast ran to the castle and destroyed it and everything inside it.
Weeks later builders produced another sparkling castle and a new royal family are moving in…



Story starts 6th-13th Feb


SS 7th 13th Feb 2015

An AMAZING number of entries this week and the quality keeps getting better and better please share and leave a comment or even better have a go yourself!

Edward Ian Kendrick 39

The greatest adventure was embarked upon not in a boat or a plane, but in a lab coat. Josh studied all of his life for the chance to stand where he stood, and he stood there every day for twenty long years.
People told him that a break-through took but seconds in a scientist’s life, but he knew they were wrong. He knew that every day that he stood and looked for the doorway was a day well spent. And every time they told him to give up he nodded and waited for them to leave, because they didn’t share his vision, because they didn’t have his commitment.
Now he stands, staring, transfixed by what is through that door – the greatest discovery in the history of man. He looks at the Multiverse and wonders – how to get there?
But how do you open the door?

Emily G 8

Once there was a toy spaceman called Specky. Hurtling toward the planet wefsgujnr he shot out his wings using his utility belt. But landed with a hard thud, onto a heap of soft, grey alien eggs. Because Specky was warm the eggs began to hatch and out popped red and green aliens. The aliens looked very weird at first sight. They grinned a sneaky grin. Specky knew this might be the end of him ……….

Dominic L 10

What are these things I thought. Then suddenly from out of nowhere I saw shadow come through the posh birch door but it was just mum. I hid the mysterious items under my covers. Then a light came from outside. It came closer. And closer. And closer. Until it was close enough to see the shape aaahhh it’s an alien. The orbs must be from it. They must be the fuel. where is the alien I thought. Suddenly, there was a huge smash as I saw the alien come through the window and took the orbs. Then he got into the aircraft and flew of. that was the last I saw of the aliens.

George D 11

5. The number shone on the metallic, silver balls. Nobody knows where they came from; we only know, one night, they appeared. Anxious, the government decided to run millions of tests on these small spheres. They are everywhere: they’re invading Earth.

4. The number fell like a timer. I sit on my bed with one of those things in my hand. Beep, beep! The machine starts to beep. A slender tube shoots out from the sphere and smashes my window.

3. I look out the window and find all the spheres are glowing green. Shocked, worried, confused, I sprint downstairs and hug my mum.

2. A whole day has passed and the numbers have finally changed. Blades stick out of the alien balls. I hold my parents close: I will never let go.

1. The ball splits in half. A small, veiny creature looks at me with wide eyes. With a croaky voice, it murmured,” Zero…”

Ella M 10

Strange tiny glowing objects were scattered all over my brunet brown couch. Was this a prank set by my mischievous little sister Lily? I started wondering down the trailing stair case. These glowing little objects started following me, surely Lily couldn’t have been able to make a prank that well. I walked on. Quiet as a mouse. Without a noise made. Funnily enough they still carried on following me. Aggravated I threw them back one by one. All of a sudden they started tackling me, they were really strong. A really big one suddenly started gathering in all of the smaller ones. It was as if they were going to war, until they all started to hatch eating their glowing shell. I opened my eyes to find I was sitting at my desk at school asleep

Oliver A 11

Glistening, transparent spheres surround the productive archipelago. It looked like a group of penguins, huddling together for warmth. The more transparent they became, the more terrified Jeff became. Frightened, scared, worried, he rapidly paced across the other worldly objects. “Creek!” the objects began to shudder. Reluctantly Jeff caught sight of a cliff and fled…
His palms were sweating, hair like a mop. He was a fast runner, fast because he had to be. After a stumble, Jeff finally made the narrow cliff. “BOOM!” all the crystal balls had fallen to the bottom of the mysterious land.
Glad to be alive Jeff suddenly disappeared. Was it real or was it just a dream? No one knew…

Ashton G 10

Every one of these dark, dismal balls of death are a different world, a different place, a different disease and all with their own habits. All with their own particular laws: all with their own certain ways of living. Their outside crust makes them what they are. They just hover there like dead spherical humans. Rotating balls of forgetfulness. They are the same humid ball of gas of what we humans live on a planet but these dejected planets don’t live in endless space, they live inside the core of us, earth. They are depressing purple because they have been smouldered right through to their core by the vast heat of the soul-taking malt and magma from the earth’s core. And on each of these harrowing planets lays one species the Gorgor…

Carlo S 10

In a flash my wardrobe was opening. There were red eyes that came closer. I grabbed the bat which I keep next to my bed then when I turned the light on it disappeared. I looked under the bed, no-one was there so I got back on. I gasped! There was a bubble, it looked cute until it popped in my mouth. He was controlling my body then a squeaky sound said “I didn’t mean to.” I needed to get this bubble out of my mouth, my hands was shaking
My face went white, I wanted to get this bubble out of my mouth. In desperation I rang Dr Mildew, he said, “You better not be wasting my time.” The more I worried, the more the more the bubble laughed. Dr Mildew said “Go toilet,” I did…flush! It stopped .

Finley A 11

It’s my first day in my new house. On the outside it looked stunning, on the inside it looked atrocious. I look around the house to find there was a very unwell rat, which looked like it was half dead, just lying there not moving any of his poor worthless muscles.
Rushing to pick it up I spotted a crate to put it in. Carefully I put him in the car and sped to the vets. The lady hurried into the lab with the poor creature in her hands. Every time people hurried in there I got more worried. Then the door opened…she was coming over to me. Instantly I stood up to hear, “I am so sorry but that rat has a new virus, which is deadly…

Keira 10

Bang! I fell into a black gloopy bubble. It felt like I’d fallen into the deep end of a swimming pool with mud in it. Frightened, worried, exhausted, I tried to escape the clutches of the minuscule bubble. The opaque bubble had looked teensy on the outside but it was gigantic on the inside. The more I struggled, the more the walls of the gargantuan bubble enclosed on me.
Pop! No gloopy mess. No more walls enclosing on me. I’m floating in mid-air, I can’t get down. Another pop. I’m falling rapidly. Snap! Nothingness. Nothing Happening. No dense ground. No artistic sky. I am an inanimate object. I can’t breathe, I can’t see, I can’t feel my heart beat. I’m dead.

Harvey B 10

They stood there, in front of me. Like nothing I’d ever seen before. My heart said touch it, my head said don’t. For if I did, I might never get out. Of course being me, I just had to touch it. My arm went in and straight back out. These holographic balls were the best: they were amazing.
I just didn’t stop, would you? In front of the fence lay four more unearthly objects just waiting for me to walk and run in and out. You see, like everybody else in my village, I had never seen anything like this. But then something went wrong …
Deciding not to be self-centred, I went to get some of my friends. The more I grew in confidence, the more hazardous I became. Little did I know, my next move was a risk not worth taking. It put my life in danger …

Adam W 11

Overnight the national space agency conducted research on the new planet F.R.U.I.T. On the outside, they were amazed. (On the inside, they were scared.) All of the crew sweated buckets. The smooth surface of the ground breaking discovery puzzled the crew. As patient as monks they waited for activity. BANG! Something viciously collided with the planet. SQUASH! The planet was squashed! All of the agencies jaws dropped.” Um guys, that wasn’t a planet, it was a grape.”

Alexie J 10

Under a full moon, strange objects came to Earth from space. They were oval and purple with a little bit of shine. They came every once a hundred years. And they were called orbs. They heal the injured and poor.
On a sunny day at 3:00 clock a girl was born with a pure heart – her name was Elizabeth. 20 years passed. Her dad was very ill. His lungs were not working as they were supposed to. Every single night Elizabeth would look outside and pray, “Please save my dad”. On the outside she smiled knowing her dad would be ok. (On the inside she would be heartbroken if her dad died)
He did not die, the orbs saved him because they always come on the 5th of June 2015. A smile came to her face that day.

Slnae F 11

In a medium bedroom lives Tony. He has these precious marbles. Despite the marbles being miniature, they each hold thousands of spectacular creatures inside. Tony doesn’t know. Inside them live enthusiastic families. The more Tony plays with them, the more jolly they are.
On Tuesday comes an unpleasant lorry which takes rubbish to a hole then a metal hand throws you into a machine. That day Tony’s mum moved her legs forward and came into the room. A huge hand grabbed the precious planets and threw them into an eerie bag. Inside, the planets the people felt like it was an earthquake. Suddenly the bag was taken into a reeking box which was moving.
After a while they were in a vile hole.
An eternity later, a muddy hand cautiously picked up the marbles and put them to his ear. The screams filled his ear.

Joshua G 10

What are they? Where did they come from? Why are they here?
Strolling down the stairs, the cup that sat on the table started to rock, so did the glass. What was happening? After, five frightening seconds, the world stood still. Earthquake, I thought. Suddenly, this little ball rolled out of the cupboard. It started to stutter as it got on the rough wooden floor. I took a good glimpse, it was getting bigger. It was like a marble. But I knew it was not a marble. It was growing. The round ball started to run. The faster the ball got, the more it grew.
Scared, the gigantic ball grew into a creature that was hungry. Balls grew behind me. I was trapped. The ball got closer and closer in till I tripped. It got even closer and…

Lucy R 10

They arrived out of nowhere. The pods. We thought we were ready; 3043 technology is the highest we’ve ever had on Earth. I can’t recall it exactly but this is the most I can remember. They chose the best time to invade. The world generator was down so no one had any electricity. Then they came, like meteorites hurling from thousands of miles in the air building up speed every millisecond. Erupting in flames, the landing spot they chose was the Atlantic Ocean. Sailing towards Britain, we knew little of what was happening. If the generators batteries were changed, if we were prepared, then we wouldn’t have been attacked. BANG! They hit the outskirts. CRASH! Now the things climbed out. The pods stood to attention. Tears fell from faces, screams flew in all directions, eyes popped out of skulls. Horrified I froze. Darkness.

Izzy 10

They moved swiftly to the breeze as they drifted effortlessly to the clouds. They shined in the sun sparkling brightly. Performing beautiful ballet elegantly moving to the wind. POP! Splash they all disappeared slowly drifting to the floor . But one floated on swiftly over roof tops and the highest trees. Racing faster and faster until it faded away over the mountains never to be seen again.

Oliver J N 11

With no name a secret science experiment has gone horribly wrong. There was no one left to save us but, Zane. He never wanted to be a hero, but this was bad, and he’s going to finish it. Spawn eggs had started spawning everywhere, horrible giant monsters crawled out, what next? He grabbed his gun and started shooting but they just kept on coming, how does he stop them? On the floor he found a letter from his dad Johnty, it said. Dear Zane, by the time your reading this everything will already have gone wrong, I didn’t mean for any of this to happen but I cant stop it now, it is up though you to save us. From Johnty. Zane grabbed his gun and started shooting again but there at the top of the tower was the only thing to kill them, they’re eggs again.

Joshua 10

One day a little boy was at a shop called malteaser fun the shop is full of chocolate balls and full inside with caramel I think everyone loves there chocolate I do. The boy is called Jacob he had £4.60 he was with his big sister Alice who went in a strop down the street as Jacob fell into a matrix of chocolate malteasers and there were over one hundred chocolate bars transformed into balls he loved eating food he likes around anything he sees even and he even likes raw pork chops . he was jumping into a whole pit of chocolate. He dived into a pool of chocolate and he began to melt. And he was doomed to death he began to melt he was starting to slowly die. This was basically the end for him… he was never ever found again…. His sister ran back to the shop , but ….

Poppy 10

These are called water balls. You can hold them unlike water. They were made in 2013 in USA. A man called Robert Fisherman designed them. The company wasn’t that big at the start but it grew pretty fast. They are newer kinds you can use as bed side lights because they have got disco lights in.

Hannah A 10

These are water balls you can hold them and it feels like you are holding water but you can’t hold water so they are different you can drop them and they won’t smash. They were first found in 1975. It all started when a scientist went down to the river to try and find an eel but instead he found these water balls and we never heard from him again he died shortly after.
Tali M V10

As I opened the door the lady was sat with marbles, a pile of pearly marbles. The weather was critical and the room was dim. The woman was laughing in a crackly voice. The wind was howling, I didn’t know what to do so I ran. I was out of the door as quick as a flash. I could still hear the woman laughing and laughing. Was she laughing at me? Did she even see me? All was quiet in the old mean house. No one was laughing anymore. The only sound was drop, drop, drop. Then stumble, stumble, stumble. It was the marbles coming down the stairs after me. I tried the door but it was locked. They were getting closer. One after one they started surrounding me. They were building up my legs all around. I tried to pick them off but it was no use. I was covered.

Calum 11

The bubbles

Once there lived a planet called boo boo bubbles the bubbles cannot be popped they got sent to earth for no reason. Maybe to have war against the EVIL bubbles but what do they use to fight? They use the BUBBLE LASER the EVIL would not stand a chance to win the EVIL would lose and GOOD WOULD WIN! Where would the fight? They would fight in the Arctic Circle. Any human that gets shot by the bubble laser will turn into a bubble and have to fight with THE BUBBLE LASER.

Sam 11

Hi my name is mark I have jet black hair and pale skin. one day I found something weird I didn’t know what they were but they seemed to have a thing In side of them but they was millions as far as the eye could see . I can here something coming form the back of the cave I’ve found myself In. it’s almost like a whisper some one talking I shout in desperation ‘’hello is someone there ‘’ no answer came back I was alone in a strange place with strange things all alone with no idea of how to escape. but out of the corner of my eye I see a little tunnel I should just be able to fit thought if I crawl. I ran for it across a field of something as soon as I get I to the tunnel and the rock collapsed behind me and in front no escape

Nathan J 10

The boy was scared and ran into an eye surgery place. He ran through the door and ran into a wall. He was knocked out cold. He woke up and fell though the floor. He landed on a pile of eyes and he fainted. Two days later. He woke up starving. Lucky for him there was a ladder so he climbed out of the pit of eyes and wanted to go home. But he couldn’t and he died.

Cory 11

These balls are eye balls they have fallen out of people who have murdered people and it’s payback. They have fallen underneath the ground and just sat there and they going to hatch to eggs of an undiscovered creature. It will be the biggest animal on the planet and they will eat humans and cars and soldiers. It will have 117 eyes, 130 legs and 2 tails and it will be smelly, ugly and fat. The eye balls are so small an ant is bigger than them if you pop the eye balls they will explode and come alive and eat you alive and it has horrible poisonous juice in it and if you drink it you will die and your eye balls will pop out of your head. Once in 1882 these 2 naughty boys found loads of eye balls so they went to them and popped them and they died.

Libby 11

One day a girl called Claraella was going to the shops to get some stuff for her step mum. Her step mum always bosses her around Claraella was working all day and night and was getting sick of it. When she was coming back from the shops an old lady came up to her and said use these balls when you get stressed out and all your worry’s will be gone but use them wisely then she walked away. A couple of weeks later Claraella was doing her homework then her step mum came in and started to yell at her saying stuff like you didn’t fluff my pillows this morning or you didn’t make my tea sweet enough then she started telling her to do things like sweep the floor do the laundry make tea. Claraella was getting stressed out then she remembered the old lady and she ran to her dresser and grabbed the balls and got one out then all of a sudden there was sparkles and every thing was done and she lived happily ever after.

Tyler 11

Once upon a time there was a little boy. He was digging on a beach at Doodle. Doodle is a little island in the middle of the Obomic ocean. The boy was called Billy, Billy is a small kid with brown hair. When he was digging he found something strange it was a box a strange black and silver box with a skull on the front of it. Billy opened the box and in side was some type of pearls. He stuffed his pockets with them and ran back to the camp site where his mum and dad where waiting for him. Billy asked his mum what these where but his mum didn’t know, neither did his dad. When he got home Billy and his family went to the police station to find out what it is. The police man said it is a pearl worth £500 each.

Elliot 11

In The United States, in the Southern West of the country there lives a 13 year old boy who had something wrong with his left pinkie toenail. It was contagious when ever his toenails touch something a different colour it would change it to crystal clear. His name is Bradley Alma. He has nine finger on his right hand. He has golden, spiky hair. It looked like sand. One day Bradley Alma went to a indoor park which had a ball pool in it. He said he was in luck. As soon as his mum paid he ran to the table took of his shoes and socks and went to the ball pool. When he jumped in his pinkie toe touched 14 balls at once and they turned crystal clear. He did not know he had that infection. He was petrified. A boy came across and saw it and cried!!

Kieran 11

The war was lost all hope has gone until THE BUBBLE BLASTER! The world felt better with power but to much I have the power we screamed. The world felt scared of what we could do with the BUBBLE BLASTER .All that we court got bubbled a huge bubble with a small human in it is that the DOOM you a wait. We bubbled most of the universe HA HA HA! All that is mine . THE END

Hannah W 10

One chilly morning a little boy called Johnny Elmer he was adventuress he loved being outdoors. His father was an inventor, (all the world was his crafting place) he said to Johnny every night. One night while Mr Elmer was sleeping Johnny decided to invent a ball. A non-toxic gelatine structure he named it Gel balls. But what he didn’t know that the gelatine he used was a form of breakfast to aliens and made them stronger.
All the sources of gelatine quickly ran out the aliens used a beacon they planted in area 51. They used that to take cooks and people who made gelatine. It was all over the news he was scared. He thought nothing of it the next morning Johnny was nowhere to be seen…

Lochlan J G 10

There it was. It small, Sphere shaped. It was strange , its supposed to be able to grant any wish you could think of…

One a sunny afternoon a young boy about the age of 12 was walking along the beach and he noticed something strange. He picked it up and shook it. It started to glow. The boy was hungry because he hadn’t had any dinner. He thought pie because that what he loved to eat. And 30 seconds later pie appeared in his hand. It was the ball. It was the ball that gave him the pie. He thought of many thing’s including a bike, a ball and a Manchester united football shirt (etc). And all of them came. He went to tell his mum but he had an idea, his mums birthday was coming up and she wanted an oven. It was going to be a good birthday.

Ben B-W 11

These strange things are called mythballs. They tell people myths and make them real. It is a dangerous item to mess with but is hard not to touch. It drags people in and then it makes them want to hold/touch the mythballs. It is strange at first, because when you touch them for the first time it makes some purple mystical dust and it goes flying into your/their body. It has a certain kind of juice that is in the ball and the juice is tasty, for the couple of seconds you live. This is why they are dangerous, because it kills you if you drink the liquid inside. The story to these balls are this. One day in 1949, these 2 boys called Jonty and Rocky who found the balls. They both took one each and began to throw them. They smashed as something appeared from right behind them….

Story start 31st jan- 6h feb 2015


Emily G 8

One day there was a man named Tony. Tony was once mighty and rich but then he was robbed and was ever so poor. He went away and nobody ever saw him again, but on April 26th 2014 he came back to his home town, he only had a bit of money, so he bought some food , enough to get him through the week until till he had some more money .

The next morning, Tony set out to the bank to see if he had any money in his account But he didn’t, so he just went back were he was. That’s were he was wanted.

Edward Ian Kendrick 39

Sun up and sun down. His mother always told him to know when the light would come. It was important he always knew. It would dictate the ebb and flow of his life.
He wasn’t an evil man. Or one that conspired to do harm. But he was from ‘dark stock’, as it was known. In the old days, when myth walked amongst man still, his special blood would have been revered, as well as feared. However, in the brighter ages of man his size and his strength marked him as from the old world of mystery, and so he was hunted.
He stopped to help an overturned cart on the road, his eye on the trapped man beneath, and not to the horizon. He shifted the cart in the dark, but took too long, and the sun brought his skin to stone.
No one wept for him.
The Troll.

Ella M 10

Dear Diary,
Today I have came across something very peculiar, you know something unusual and strange. Usually on a icy cold day here in Devon you don’t see a cowboy, or in my case a statue of a cowboy. The wind was blowing, trees were shaking, clocks started churning. Suddenly a picture had popped into my abundant mind, could that have been my Father, the one who was said to have died when fighting in the war, but how could this have happened to him. Only last year me and mother went to his grave at Westhill memorial services. Could that have a different corpse, or no corpse at alright now my head is full of questions. I will have to tell mum as soon as I can, but for now I will just keep thinking.

Cory 11

This man has been to mega mountain park and then he got on to a ship and sailed away to the Himalayas where the bigfoot are. Then he got off at a island where there were soldiers and other people with guns as well. Then he got tortured and took to there base at mega mountain park and then they tortured him even more but one day he escaped and ran to a town called koga in japan. He didn’t have any food or water and he kept on looking but he couldn’t find anything so he ate out of the bin and drank the water in the lake. But he died afterwards and he had a grave in the cemetery and the grave said R.I.P and all his family came to say goodbye and then they went home and started crying and they jumped of a cliff and died.

Ben 11

This man, was found on an Island called ‘Subanda’. This Island was abandoned and had been left for years alone. He was found by a man called Simon. He was a police man who went to investigate all over to find out certain things. The man who was found was very dangerous and had a gun in his back pocket. He had been disarmed and the police officer called for help. After the police got him into a Helicopter, they took off to the Himalayas. Nobody knew why but after he was took there, he was never seen again. There were myths going around that were basically trying to say but in a complicated way that the man who was took to the Himalayas was ate by a specie called Big Foot. This specie is also known as a Yeti. They are very dangerous, but still have never been found…

Libby 11

Once upon a time along time ago their lived a sailor. He was a grate sailor he’s sailed to the Atlantic ocean and back to London 10 times. He sailed alone well except from his dog captain. One day he sailed to an island and went into a café to get some food and a man came in and started speaking to him. The man said I’ve seen you sailing your really good would you like to be the captain of a new ship the titanic. He said yes and became famous and they made a statue of him

Story start 24th – 30th January


Not many entries this week but still brilliant writers one and all.

SS 24th – 30th Jan 15

Angel 10

on the 1st of January on new years day I went on a stroll to the woods .I unexpectedly came across an old creaky house.

I didn’t know whether it was a farm or just an old house sitting there like a pet in a pet shop trying to get a home.

I didn’t go into the house because if I went in and someone was just watching TV I would feel very guilty so I chose not to and I carried on my walk but of Course this left in suspense…

Mark O 10

How I became friends with a ghost…
on summers holiday me and my friends were walk down a old road we never walked the old road we always walk down the new road we walk pass a old house we where thinking about going inside but we didn’t so when we go out we walk down the old road but one time we walked down the old road at night we kept hearing and seeing thing then a ghost came and said “Hi” my friends were so scared that they ran away but I didn’t run away thought that it was a nice ghost so every Sunday and Saturday night I would see the ghost

Olivia G 10

As I walked through the small dark forest I saw an old overgrown garden with a house stood in the centre! wow I shouted with excitement! thinking whether I should go in, the door crept open. Hello ,hello anyone in ??yes there is said a deep dark voice come and sit down there it was again. show your face little child. um… Who is this? I questioned, mysteriously ! Its Toby, Toby Caldron and what is your name ? Its Olivia Giddy! Oh well hello Olivia nice to meet you. my mum told me never to talk to strangers! But I’m not a stranger you know me! Do I? I don’t think I do but Toby caldron rings ,
a bell. A name I’ve heard before. So you do know me, I’m an old friend Olivia! your not you can’t be I don’t have many friends. Well let me tell you about my life…

Ella 10

One day Chloe, the short blue eyed female, was taking a stroll through the old bewildered forest. Strokes of wind flew by in a rush to get to the north mountain. As Chloe walked forwards a vague shadow of a house drew nearer and nearer one step at a time. With curiosity Chloe walked closer and closer being careful not to miss a single inch. Pulling herself together she knocked on the door. There was no answer. Was anyone in there? Pushing hard against the door she managed to open it. creeaak! She stepped into the house. Walking around the house felt very odd, often she would hear whiffs of breathing. Chloe walked slowly towards the couch. All of a sudden her friend popped out from behind the couch! Was this a trick set for Chloe, will we ever know.

Fahd 10

I walked through to the secret house…As I approached it cautiously the door creaked open although nobody opened it. It was now midnight and I silently, swiftly moved upstairs to a old dusty, silent room, I twisted a golden handle and ran inside to the secret corridor. There was a note on the wall: “Pick the knife, cut the rope and be prepared FOR DEATH!”
I picked the knife and I cut the rope, something was rumbling above me it was a ROCK! I dived left in a swift movement and I saw a hole… 2 seconds later another note appeared.” Jump down the hole a expect a shock!” I jumped down the hole and found spiders in a cave just 3 meters forward from where I landed. The Cave Spiders scuttled around me and when I thought I was done for they stopped… I was safe. I quickly escaped…

Elizabeth P 10

What could be worse? I was lost and alone in an abandoned forest. Sprinting, “Arrrrrrr!” I screamed while falling to the ground. I looked up to see that I had come across a small house. I wonder who lives there? The small house looked peaceful and inviting as the door swung open.
“Aarr! No, help me!” someone screamed. It sounded as though it was coming from the house. I slowly stepped towards the house. All of a sudden I heard cackling. “ha ha ha ha ha!” I heard a girl screaming again. What do I do shall I save the girl or not?

Sophia 12

He stares at me with huge,orb-like eyes. “I live here.” His voice is quiet and whispery. “I know.” I snap. His stare is disconcerting. “I mean where are your parents?”
“I live here.” He slips farther back into the door. “They have been gone for a long time.” His voice is ominous.
“Yes,a very long time. They left us here.” A higher more melodic voice chimes. A head of dark brown curls peeks out from around the boy. “Shh Bonnie.” Around the door I can see him take her hand in his and I think he says something. The girl,Bonnie, slips back into the house. “Bye.” Her voice floats behind her as she disappears. And with that the boy shuts the door and I stand in front if the yellow cottage like a lost child. My visit has left me even more confused than before…..